Reviews for Independence Day |
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![]() ![]() Nice so far |
![]() ![]() What's got me curious is why Ranma, who *knows* better than to even attempt to second guess Nabiki, hasn't even reacted in the slightest to her decision to get the hell out of Tokyo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interessting story so far up to your usual standards however I'm afraid to say thats about all I can say so far beyond mentioning the particular things I liked since were still in the build up phase at the moment. Hmm I'm rather looking forward to seeing how Ranma deals with his mother when the aliens invade is he going to come clean or try to fight as Ranko. Interesting that Cologne noticed the danger coming but Happosai apparently hasn't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang Nabiki's paranoid. Absolutely right of course, but that's a hell of a conclusion to jump to based on the first news reports. Anyway, Ranma crew fighting the aliens seems kind of curious as how it would get to that, not like they could fly up into the ship and blast their way in. I wonder how many of these ships Ryoga's going to see given how much mileage that boy puts on his feet. Heh, wouldn't surprise me if he ended up in the mothership for a bit. |
![]() ![]() Finally ! Its action time ! No, honestly, its been really good so far and I have high hopes that its gonna get even better from here on. I must admit Im *intensly* curious about how you will fit the Ranma-gang into the fight against the aliens. I mean they cant fly and they havent exactly got superpowers either (not BIG superpowers anyway) But my Million-Dollar Question is this.: Is the "ID-movie" taking place in the US in the meantime all of this happens, or is this a completly independent independence day story? |
![]() ![]() Woho! The wait has been worth it! So, Nabiki figured out what's going on here, and is already planning on survival. You are already planning on who is going to live and who's going to be fried on the blast, huh? Why do I have the suspicion that you'll have Kasumi among the first one to be killed on the first attack? Awful thought, but it's a possibility. she gives me the impression of that stripper on the movie that was directly under the beam. Oh well, let's wait and see. Cologne? M. yes, the amazons will survive, that's a given. The Kunos? 50-50 chance of survival so far, need more data. Iroshi and Daisuke? same, just like Yuka and Sayuri; again, need more data. This story is truly shaping wonderfully! Kudos for a great writer. Keep 'em coming! |
![]() ![]() I just finish reading chapter 4 and I LOVE IT! It figure that Nabiki knows about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well.I see your taking a spin. I your going to do i hope to everything merciful that these type of aliens dont do anal probes *shudder* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting concept, even if it was a dare. Taking a break from the "Sailor Ranko" series? You better not be otherwise there will be a 10 pizzas delivered to _your_ door, and this time you're paying Buwahahahaha. Anyhoo, just as a suggestion, it kinda ruins the impending sense of doom and disaster if you give the aliens humanistic qualities. So far they don't really sound like the life-sucking sons of b!tche$ they are! Keep up the good work though. |
![]() ![]() I have a great vision of happiness of this fic ! muahhahahahahaah! i was in the aliens position i would take over as as HomeWorld (if any of you ever played that) |
![]() ![]() I have a great vision of happiness of this fic ! muahhahahahahaah! i was in the aliens position i would take over as as HomeWorld (if any of you ever played that) |
![]() ![]() I liked the opening chapter, please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Using your past fics, this could work. I'm guessing Darkfic. Ahh kill off humanity and give Ranma a makeover _ |
![]() ![]() This is very good. I'm a big Ranma fan and enjoyed it. Hurry up with the next episode ;) PS: No aliens yet :( (I wanna see Ranma thrashin 'em) |