Reviews for Limited Palette |
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![]() ![]() It says canceled and you don't seem to post on FFN anymore so I'm assuming that you're done with writing, at least on the fanfiction site. So just wanted to say, that your work was really good on both stories you have up, of you ever see this I hope you're doing well and enjoying life, your work is really amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mm! Ya dun it now, kid. Ya dun it now... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update. Please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why am I jumping on this ship train so late? Love the fic btw. |
![]() ![]() FINALLY, Kim got an answer. YES, after four or so chapters, thank you. Keep up the great work dude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why won't you update... People are dying out here. |
![]() ![]() please update soon |
![]() ![]() Where to from here? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it up love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() She wants to take over the world! Mwa-ha-ha! Shego managed all that on the game leg? The girl has sand, she does. No time for a long and thoughtful review. Good action, nice bit of development. Everybody in character. I like the conversation at the end. Is Kim afraid to partner with Ron because she fears that he'll kill again to protect her? Yeah, that would be Kim. And of course they haven't talked about it. Facing murderous supervillains is straightforward. Discussing the nuances of justifiable homicide with someone who loves you and is doing it for you is kinda not. A couple of typos: "landed in a couch" "whule Ron showed" "her arching muscles" "craft scrapped against rock" "immediately childed herself" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to said that when I see the notice for the next chapter, I asked myself what is this story and mostly how can she be in my favorite list if I forget about it, so re-read the first chapter ( really fast ) and then with the letter and Shego waiting at the school ; all that I forget come back in full force at top speed until the last chapter. So first : Welcome back/home ! And then, good damn job, this chapter was a blast. Hope to see the next soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo love their interaction in this...just please tell me healthy shego is stronger thn ron...HAS to be. |
![]() ![]() Totally wish Kim had just broke up with doofus oops sorry I meant Ronald. Hope the dynamic duo can nip this crazy ladies plan soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woot! Nice to see this updated! Haha, you know it was weird as all hell to see Ron of all people acting like an implacable blue glowing terminator who sent Shego AND Kim running for the hills. That was just... bizzare. Hope it doesnt become a recurring theme, or if it does it should be something of a gag. I just can't take Ron the legit unironic badass seriously... at all! :D Also, Umbra trying to take over the world? Well, DUH! That went without saying. Hope you got more specifics than that Shego ;) Glad this story isn't dead. Would love to see more of it. Thanks again! |
![]() ![]() Just found the story and I think it's awesome. I'm really glad your going to be continuing it. |