Reviews for Eye of the Sword |
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![]() ![]() Well...that was a complete disappointment and a waste of time, I think I'll go read From Fake Dreams again to try and erase this abomination from my memory. Meanwhile I whish you the best of luck in whatever you plan to do in your life as long as it doesn't involve writing, in which case you should really consider doing something more healthy for society, like jumping off a cliff |
![]() ![]() ![]() Germany not Europe. The Einzberns are German |
![]() ![]() ![]() DID NOT SEE A THREESOME INCOMING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() freaking wholesome ending! wish the epilogue was long, but I like it this way too. Good story (despite my wish it was longer). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing and touching chapters and characters development |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shirou is asking stuff about human nature and the human psyche at 5 years old lol. haha Kiritsugu is like 'fuck. my son is so messed up in the head he has a literal inhuman perspective of the world (reality marble)'. haha Kiritsugu summing up the 4th war to Shirou. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol Kerry having an 'Erank cooking skill...I could imagine that being an actual hidden skill if he was a servant (not counting EMIYA assasin). |
![]() ![]() ![]() enjoyed this! Illya sadly wasn't mentioned in the Epilogue but hopefully they saved her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you actually aren't pushing a boundary with the crest. magus familes take in magically adept chikdren from other families whenever they are in decline similar to the Matou with Sakura... but with Magic crest transplantation... it can be lethal but it is done by them |
![]() ![]() I would have really like the story if you have not involved anyone else other than kiritsugu |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for taking the time to write this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's well written, the pacing is good, and its complete. My mind is blown. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly could stand to be a lot better in certain regards. Less Shirou wanking, less fanon, better build up and seeing relations grow, etc. but as it stands this is somewhere in the Top 100 or so stories in this series solely due finishing, lackluster in ending/otherwise or not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story so far. Got two typos to flag however, in chapter 7. When shirou first wakes up and is talking with sakura and rin you called sakura 'samurai'. Probably autocorrect. Also in the bath scene you said that rider grabbed tohsaka and rin instead of sakura and rin. Hope this helps. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it ven if absorbing Archer incapacitated Shirou big part of the grail war. It wasn’t better until Archer disappear so that part was tough but in reality mistakes happens all the time, so is normal than when they more need it Shirou and Archer get knock out of the game almost until the last battle that almost killed Shirou. But i like character development your Shirou and how He Sakura and Rin get their happy ending. I would love to see their kids, why they don’t have any? |