Not bad...it's interesting to see a canon not all Harry-Ron-etc. obsessed with minor self-insertion. My only suggestion, really, is give Lily some -faults-. So far, she seems a little too "perfect, but prosecuted". And I don't know...maybe it would've been more effective if you introduced new villainish peoples and alliances, instead of just using people's parents? Just suggestions. It was reasonably well done for the genre.

wow, lol. petunia has a split personality. lol, LOVIN THE STORY!oh, but i need help, my e-mail is i need help, my idiotic computer wont let me add chapters, i need someone's advice.

great story. stupid 'tunia. its just like her to put her sisters life in danger by the death eaters. i hope you update soon.

-a big fan

Aw poor ! This chapter was really really good! FABULOUS! I love this story! Again thanks for reviewing mine all those times you did! PLEASE write more soon~

As good as the other chaps, not better! Can't wait to know what'll happen. Write more asap!

WOOPS!

sorry I replied 3 times!

Hope you dont mind (prolly not ;) )

hi

Nice fic you hav there!

hi

Nice fic you hav there!

hi

Nice fic you hav there!

first of all, i love her dreams. she would be really good in divinatation. secondly how come peter is in huff. i thought in the book he was in grifindor. is it just an author thing. oh well, i guess i'll just have to find out when you update.

-a big fan

YAY! more reading! anyway, great second chappy can't wait 4 more!

SUPER GREAT! As always, this was a great chapter...and they met Sirius, so you're sure I'm happy!*winks*

This part is cool too! U have talent im glad u aint letting it go down the drain :)

Hey Crazy! Like i sed...it rox! I seriously like it! :D

hi just checking by to see if there are any good fanfics

I like it this one, I'm usually VERY critical with fanfics but I like this one!