|Reviews for Into the Citadel|
| Quintain Apprentince of Alduin chapter 2 . 12/20/2015
The only thing that I have to say, is how the fuck did the Citadel return to its normal position, and why the Destroy ending? Please tell me your not one of those people whom think that the Indoctrination Theory is actually true...
| komentator chapter 2 . 12/19/2015
I like your idea, it is not knew. But I like that you are using the 12th regeneration, because Capaldi is awesome Doctor. Can say how good you managed to wrote the characters, because of the short chapters, but at the moment I like what I see, can't say about the grammar thought, because English isn't my main language, but I think everything is good.
Waiting for the next update, hope it would be bigger.
With regards Komentator.