Such an amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next one.

Great chapter. U don't disappoint

After reading your fanfiction I decided to go back and reread Life and Death and I have to say you give the original author a run for her money, to say the least. Your take on Beau and his love sick escapades is just so compelling. You manage to infuse a very subdued tone to your story and your writing that blends well with the fantastical and at times melodramatic themes of twilight. You really did take the story of twilight and make it your own and with such apparent ease. Well done, friend, I await your future updates with bated breath!

I really like your adaptations and your Beau! Super excited to see if he'll try and hit female!Paul. I realise Beau isn't violent but neither is Bella. I feel like Meyer made the book even more sexist with her changes and you seem to be a lot better about the equality, so I'm really interested in seeing how you tackle that.

post the next chapter PLEASE...

post your next chapter soon PLEASE...

;sls;ls

Thanks God,I had finally finished my exam(well,hope I had passed it,too...).When I could surf the Internet again,I immediately checked your you had already updated that much is such a happy thing to do! Beau's "Who knows?"really made me laugh,I can't wait to see his performance in the next chapter.

Ugh it's so good, I need more!

We're getting closer to the end hmmm I wonder if you would stick by the original series or would you add amic of your own like instead of a beau and edythe you would make it a julie and beau but ofcourse you're a brilliant author

Really great chapter! It's going to be funny to see how beau confronts a pack of females

Best Life And Death fic I've ever read, though there's not many owo
Keep up the awesome work

Great. Thanks for writing this amazing story

Yes! The Reunion is not far off. Thank you for updating!

Nice! liked this chapter, good job!