|Reviews for Hidden Audience|
| Axcel chapter 1 . 8/11
Hope you got a new job. I also hope you continue this fic or make a sequel to it.
| furyuu chapter 1 . 6/15
This would make an awesome series
| psp reader chapter 1 . 6/4
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/3
You should have a story about what Jaune and Pyrrha were doing slightly before Ruby's part began
| Tailturner chapter 1 . 4/28
I know that this is definitely a fetish some people have, but I just find this hilarious. I am so glad my family are deep sleepers, I really needed the laughs.
| w0tevr chapter 1 . 4/1
I await a sequel
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!
THIS STORY HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL THE UTTER HILARITY OF WHAT MIGHT HAPPEN NEXT IS KILLING ME!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/11
| Fantasy OH YEA chapter 1 . 2/10
This is a hilarious story. Also very... Intimate. I love your work so just keep being awesome! :)
| TheBlueNecromancer chapter 1 . 1/29
LOL this story made me laugh so hard. While it was short it fits the theme so well. Thanks for the laugh man.
| howmanyisthat chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
That was great! Loved that last wink from Pyrrha
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
I really like this oneshot. It could make a really go jaune harem fic. Funny all the way.
| Sir Deadpool chapter 1 . 9/20/2016
So was this just a one shot? Would love to see more done with this story.
| V4UL7-HUN73R chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
you should continue this but with team rwby trying to claim jaune as their own
| Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
Okay. This. Was. Weird. But a good weird. I enjoyed this story. What I find hard to believe is that the four girls of RWBY would all have somewhere the hots for Jaune. Good things they weren't caught. That would make things awkward.
That Ruby would be jealous was unbelievable. I liked it. A lot.
Please keep the good work up.