Reviews for The New Order of Tribes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really like what you've done with the story so far, looking forward to the next installment! |
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![]() ![]() so...this is basically a feel good story. i don't mind stories where one side has overwhelming power over the other, as long as it's written well. this story more often than not falls somewhat short. frankly, the colonials, despite their situation, are having way too easy of a time of it. the politics are kind of kindergartner and at times contrived. still, all in all, not a bad story. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() looking forward to the next update! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful, as per usual. You've shown how the Cylons are adjusting to what they're seeing. How about the Colonial travelers? What are their thoughts? Are any of them sure that this is Earth? Plus, I can only imagine how the sick and injured are dealing as they are so close to treatment... All in call, I look forward to the next chapter. Take care, be well AlbertG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me likey. I prefer stories a few points harder; emphasis on differences in language and culture, first contact which take more than five minutes to get to the face-to-face meetings, and so on - but then Stargate was never that big on it either, so I guess you're true to the source material. The gun porn was a bit forced, but I perfectly understand the need for honking big space guns. |
![]() ![]() ![]() another brilliant chapter , keep up the good work! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter. roslin now know the truth about the lords of kobol and colonial survivors. and earth republic plan to save them (can't wit to see cyrannus survivors when they will see the hundred ships of Earth 4th fleet entering their system. And the relationship between republic people and differents colonial is fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job on dealing with the personalities and the conflicts. Well done! |