Reviews for For Love of Magic
A Trash Mob chapter 20 . 3h
DX my ship has sunk
GoMagikarp chapter 32 . 5h
Harry has been getting real god damn preachy the last few chapters, to the point it's starting to detract from the story. You're an amazing writer and I love the story, but it just feels like thinly veiled attempts to spout your opinions on how stupid various things are through Harry.

Granted, he's at the age where he became a whiny little shit in the Half Blood Prince, so I guess I'll be optimistic and assume you're simply mirroring Harry's annoying know-it-all teenage phase.
A Trash Mob chapter 18 . 20h
This chapter was a fuckin roller coaster of emotions. Im upset a krums death

"Adrastia smiled widely in amusement and echoed the toast despite taking some splash damage from it. She had needled him about his girlfriend earlier so it was only fair."
God thats so fucking self aware XD
A Trash Mob chapter 17 . 22h
"Adrastia smiled a predator's smile as Sirius groaned under her and discharged his seed. In this unguarded moment when all his defenses were lowered and he gave of himself to her, she wrapped the tendrils of her magic around him and drew him in even further. She had done it before and she would do it again, until his entire world revolved around her.

He opened his eyes and stared up at her adoringly. In this moment, he loved her, but his magic was already disentangling itself from hers and the sensation was fading. That was alright, she was in no hurry. She had a whole year to play with him and it would give her time to decide on an appropriate death. He was young, handsome, strong, rich and not at all bad in bed. A better plaything than most and one that it would be a shame to discard prematurely.

XXXXX

Harry let out a long, content sigh as he released into his girlfriend again.

Lying on her stomach under him, Tonks just groaned softly as her insides tingled with pleasure.

Relaxing into post-coital bliss, Harry spread his magic over hers like a spiritual hug and settled down to enjoy the moment. Feeling her relax and open up to him completely in these moments was every bit as good as the actual sex.

A few minutes later, he felt her breathing even out and her presence become muted as she drifted off to sleep.

Harry sighed in slight disappointment, but smiled all the same, planting a kiss on her neck, getting off her and covering her with sheets they'd kicked off a while ago. He could easily go for another round or two, but Dora had a long day behind her already and he wasn't going to keep her awake. He'd been tiring her out with his frequent visits too.

Besides, he would be back for more soon enough."

Fuck.
I don't like you anymore
Honks is my flagship dammit why you gotta do this too me
Fuck you.

Ok not really i know its just part of the story buts its a part im not happy with dammit
A Trash Mob chapter 13 . 5/5
I like O'sullivan. Lol
A Trash Mob chapter 11 . 5/5
This review was meant for chapter 12 but i posted there last time i read this.

So does tonk (and evey other girl) know that harry is using his magic? Because i cant tell and it reeks of subtle manipulation if they don't, and im not even sure if he realizes it.

Im really into this fic, you did so well with it.
Wombles chapter 16 . 5/5
Ugh, the bullshit about muh bigotry and "race is only skin color!" in this story is so fucking gay and cringe. Race is real, people are different. Anyone with two brain cells can see this.

Perhaps people should be equal in the eyes of the law and perhaps they are equal before God, but no individual or group is ever equal on Earth.

I've already read your stories once before, hopefully now you're a little more based and a little less cucked, my friend.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/4
Fuck if I'm gonna spend and more time reading about a misanthropic little shit (that stinks of a self insert) like this.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4
So why do you suppose I would want to read any more about such a miserable little prick, author? This is a terrible goddamn protagonist.
uflesh940 chapter 12 . 5/1
You know, I had my doubts, but this has definitely improved alot since the beginning of the book. Definitely glad I preserved!
uflesh940 chapter 1 . 5/1
Why doesn't Harry just remove all his money from his trust vault every year? Instead, he ends up lowering his annual income by 200 galleons.
d'elfe chapter 2 . 4/29
Damn, you had me laughing quite a lot there.
This take on Harry Potter is so much more realistic. No Mary Sue, magic that is actually explained properly AND a little psychology. Wow.
And I loved his present to Snape.
Mary Andrew chapter 34 . 4/28
Juro que iba a escribir en el último capítulo pero no me aguante y es para decirte que amo a este Harry Dios aparte de todo el sexo soy prácticamente él. Su desprecio hacia la hipocresía,religión hasta la gente misma. Si simplemente adoro a este chico ...
SaintlyMonarch chapter 1 . 4/28
Trash.
Senku Kun chapter 19 . 4/28
so manymundanewords
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