Reviews for RWBY and JNPR's Twisted Lives
Style chapter 63 . 8/29
Yay, new update! Interesting how Yang's subconscious views Ruby...
Mooniecat chapter 14 . 8/29
Another in-chapter repeat (Ch. 14). Need to go thru and clean these up.
Rwby Arc chapter 63 . 8/29
Omg I am so early
Mooniecat chapter 4 . 8/28
You really need to fix this chapter (Ch. 4). It is longer because the whole thing reprinted at the bottom.
Rwby Arc chapter 5 . 8/25
I feel like a pervert reading this...especially with Nora and Ren
Sean Bruce chapter 62 . 6/25
There's a fan theory that Yang's semblance is sentient or something like that, or that Yang feels like she's a monster due to her eyes changing color.

Can you do a chapter where Yang fights her semblance like how Ruby fought Bloody Rose?
DennyIsMenece chapter 62 . 6/14
Can't wait till next chapter lmao here I come
Style chapter 61 . 6/12
So far I'm rooting for either Ruby-x-Yang(for obvious reasons) or for Ruby-x-Jaune. At this point in the game, just have Ruby end up with SOMEONE, I really don't care who.
Jack Redhawke chapter 4 . 5/25
You have the ending half of this chapter twice
Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 62 . 5/24
I haven't thought about that book series in years! I wish that I actually finished it now.
RWBY Man chapter 54 . 5/5
Could you do a sequel to this but instead the twist RWBY, go to their Alpha counterparts I'd see where people aren't afraid in Alpha RWBY world hope make a sequel to this.
bretnorris0 chapter 30 . 4/30
can we have more of this
MizoreShirayukiFan chapter 1 . 4/29
you made Ruby into Deadpool, epic!
Naruto Uchiha 999 chapter 61 . 4/29
OMG RUBY BROKE THE FOURTH WALL. UHH, WHAT IS THIS GOING TO CHANGE NOW?
Guest chapter 3 . 4/11
I love this version of ruby she crazy like joker and deapool mixed
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