Reviews for The Chase
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
Very good.
TrekkyGirl55 chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
WOW! Have you ever considered writing books about Trek? This is BEAUTIFUL! I love how you capture the little 's emotions and how Saavik appears to her.
Keep writing!
Saavik13 chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
wow. simply wow.
Lady Tristania chapter 1 . 2/10/2003
S sweet, little girl, saavik's background. Like the idea and the story. keep up the good work!
Khiori chapter 1 . 2/4/2003
This was truly beautiful. Painful. Connected perfectly from child to Saavik, from adult Saavik to the child Saavik, from Spock to Saavik and Saavik to Leena. Perfect. With all the past anger and hatred and fear to the present-and showing what is still to come. A cycle. Spock broke the first with Saavik. Now she is trying to break it again with this child. With her fellow officers. With herself. It is the simple images that hit the hardest in this story: The child trying to not see the blood, Saavik's careful quiet offer of comfort in opening her jacket, Saavik's struggle against the past this present stirs again, the officer's smell like Daddy, her fierce hold to the promise, Saavik watching her, and the tears that can only come when it is safe at last to cry.

You caught the child's trauma, her thought patterns. Her similiarity to Saavik. Her faith that Saavik would make the fighting stop. Would keep the Romulans away forever. Would find the others. That she was strong enough to do it. That it would then be okay again. The parallels between this child and Saavik are painful, and incredible.

You've caught everything-ugly and beautiful in the soul. And it hurts even as it gives Saavik's same promise. I loved it.
Sierra Nichole chapter 1 . 1/24/2003