|Reviews for Adventures in Magick|
| jaqmaq77 chapter 17 . 5/2
still not sure and unconvinced... simply because you set up the whole story as a highly intelligent, puzzle solving, book reading, information gathering, bright and cheerful, happy go lucky, full of curiosity boy... where in the name of all that's holy does that say Slytherin? Please... whatever it is you smoked or injected when you made that decision - send me some because that is some seriously strong... medication...
But even though I can only liken following this to following a black cat through a coal pit at midnight while wearing a blindfold and being roaring drunk, I must, even though really frustrated that I can't follow you through a fresh snowfall - I will keep reading... it's like watching a motorway pile-up... I just can't look away... and then you throw in Draco the Ravenclaw... 'shudder'...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 16 . 5/2
Okay - I made it to 16 and then you go and spoil it by putting Harry in Slytherin... Sad, just sad... and it was shaping up as a really good story... and now I will read a few more chapters to see if it still grabs me... so many twists its turned into a corkscrew... Draco talking to Tonks, Blaze a vamp, Harry friendly with the Malfoys I can accept - Harry in Ravenclaw could have been great but Slytherin? Just too predictable and wrong - even Hufflepuff would have been understood...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 9 . 5/2
what a pity this story got no end
Two years since last update you send
I hope and I prey
You end it one day
for this story is brilliant my friend
| jaqmaq77 chapter 7 . 5/2
Well young Harry don't do things by half
as he baffles most of the staff
while Hagrid sits in the bar
Harry's ideas will make him a star
If he keeps on this track
they will welcome him back
Young Harry will really go far.
| jaqmaq77 chapter 6 . 5/2
Oh... one more step and he could have landed in Ank-Morpork, through one of those shops... Makes me wonder how Voldemort would have faired against Granny Weatherwax, and Nanny Ogg...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 5 . 5/2
A nice Malfoy? Are we in a alternate universe already... oh how stupid of me... of course we are so it's all okay...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 4 . 5/2
Yes... Harry meets the twins...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 3 . 5/2
oh... it gets better and better... liked this chapter too...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 1 . 5/2
If this start is anything to go by - I hope it is one day finished with lots and lots of chapters... I'm loving it, and only one chapter in...
| Blackpheonix chapter 1 . 4/27
Hi, as I said before it's a great story but looks abandoned. Recently was going through the list of your other stories, most of them have a good idea for plot and seem very promising but all of them so far aren't finished and look abandoned. It is a common issue for you? I mean there's a lot of writers who have good ideas but get stuck at some point. I hope you finished at least something, maybe not fanfiction story but a real oriental one, you do have a big potential for writing and really good with words. Good luck with your writing and everything else.
| chubbycherub chapter 1 . 4/16
Pleeease, write more?
| draco139 chapter 10 . 3/30
You know there is no character in the HARRY Potter series named Hadrian. This was enjoyable until that idiotic choice of name.
| Wilfite chapter 32 . 3/25
Don't know if this will ever be completed at this point (I'm not one to speak..), but I absolutely love this story. it has such a unique feel, like classic fantasy scifi, almost heinlein-esque in the way you invite the reader to think, rather than simply consume. Sure, there are spelling and grammer errors and some of it's probably more vague than it needs to be, but you've created a unique world that is a pleasure to live in if only for a short while. I truly hope you can find the inspiration to take this to where it wants to go.
| tammgrogan chapter 1 . 3/19
That was a truly AWESOME beginning I will be looking forward to your next update. Until then take care.
| dkchs chapter 19 . 3/13
i want to beat those random boys up
its on sight bitch. how dare u bully our protagonist