It’s a real shame you’ve discontinued your work. This and Just a Few Pointers were really good.

ah this might be a harem. lol just saber

Would you be willing to tell me what the pairing is, I'm curious and it's not like finding out will ruin the story for me

I still come back to this fanfic every once in a while to see if it has been updated. For sure one of most interesting Jaune centric stories, specially with how it takes the character.

Sweet home Alabama.

killkng someone and calling yourself a monster? kimda illogical

That "haha Yang likes violence" bit is getting old. Please don't make this a a harem.

Okay, so he'll tell Weiss "later". With the way this Jaune is written, I imagine we'll find get that scene around chapter 40 and while in the middle of battle or something.

I hate how you've made Weiss unable to recognise a voice she's heard in the past and that has apparently been on her mind repeatedly, according to your own story. I dislike how you've made her unreasonably angry with Jaune, even more hostile than she was in canon with everyone, and unable to put his voice and the "snow angel" nickname use together.

Are you going to use this as manufactured drama? If so, why?

Damn, he looks genuinely scared. Seems like we're doing the typical anime "haha friends who abuse and make each other fearful" thing? Alright..

Oh, god... please just let these people want to be friends.

Hope you updated this!

This has been an amazing story to read. I do know the feeling of lacking motivation and reason to write, but it will hopefully return. Take care and stay safe.

So, for an evacuation mission, they hired students to dick about for a day for 'recon' instead of just outright beginning the evacuation? Recon which apparently involved a minimum kill quota and sending off a woman who could have just evacuated everyone on the day they arrived long before the Grimm appeared. Is that right? Or am I missing something?
On a side note, why wouldn't Jaune tell his only friend that a suspicious woman he owes a debt to in dubious circumstances was randomly interested in her and may have exploited the hunter system to get the two of them alone with her in a remote village? Especially after he found out she lied for 'fun' and after Yang confronted him on why he was defensive towards her.
Also if Sherry knew this all would happen, why wouldn't she inform them and why wouldn't she stress why they needed to stay by the mine entrance? Why would Qrow send them off if he knew what would happen and about Sherry's ability? You used these as points of criticism against Qrow but they just outright don't make sense; a lot of this chapter doesn't.

This could be the start of a new company: the Arc Ammunition Association