Reviews for Technician
Guest chapter 42 . 3/9
It’s a real shame you’ve discontinued your work. This and Just a Few Pointers were really good.
Efthee chapter 8 . 3/6
ah this might be a harem. lol just saber
RandoFox chapter 3 . 1/27
Would you be willing to tell me what the pairing is, I'm curious and it's not like finding out will ruin the story for me
Cloudy09 chapter 42 . 1/15
I still come back to this fanfic every once in a while to see if it has been updated. For sure one of most interesting Jaune centric stories, specially with how it takes the character.
ThatSpaceMann2 chapter 25 . 1/8
Sweet home Alabama.
Cap'n Mel chapter 10 . 7/18/2022
killkng someone and calling yourself a monster? kimda illogical
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 42 . 6/24/2022
That "haha Yang likes violence" bit is getting old. Please don't make this a a harem.
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 25 . 6/23/2022
Okay, so he'll tell Weiss "later". With the way this Jaune is written, I imagine we'll find get that scene around chapter 40 and while in the middle of battle or something.
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 23 . 6/23/2022
I hate how you've made Weiss unable to recognise a voice she's heard in the past and that has apparently been on her mind repeatedly, according to your own story. I dislike how you've made her unreasonably angry with Jaune, even more hostile than she was in canon with everyone, and unable to put his voice and the "snow angel" nickname use together.

Are you going to use this as manufactured drama? If so, why?
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 21 . 6/23/2022
Damn, he looks genuinely scared. Seems like we're doing the typical anime "haha friends who abuse and make each other fearful" thing? Alright..
Terracotta Tortilla chapter 18 . 6/23/2022
Oh, god... please just let these people want to be friends.
DarkMatter69 chapter 42 . 3/29/2022
Hope you updated this!
Scrumblenut chapter 42 . 2/25/2022
This has been an amazing story to read. I do know the feeling of lacking motivation and reason to write, but it will hopefully return. Take care and stay safe.
One Fall Leaf chapter 13 . 12/20/2021
So, for an evacuation mission, they hired students to dick about for a day for 'recon' instead of just outright beginning the evacuation? Recon which apparently involved a minimum kill quota and sending off a woman who could have just evacuated everyone on the day they arrived long before the Grimm appeared. Is that right? Or am I missing something?
On a side note, why wouldn't Jaune tell his only friend that a suspicious woman he owes a debt to in dubious circumstances was randomly interested in her and may have exploited the hunter system to get the two of them alone with her in a remote village? Especially after he found out she lied for 'fun' and after Yang confronted him on why he was defensive towards her.
Also if Sherry knew this all would happen, why wouldn't she inform them and why wouldn't she stress why they needed to stay by the mine entrance? Why would Qrow send them off if he knew what would happen and about Sherry's ability? You used these as points of criticism against Qrow but they just outright don't make sense; a lot of this chapter doesn't.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/17/2021
This could be the start of a new company: the Arc Ammunition Association
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