Reviews for Shadow of the Past |
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Greenwood girl chapter 14 . 9/2/2014 Hey the one that's says it's freaked out with the echin9 that me I forgot to type my name |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/2/2014 Please don't abuse this email! I'm kinda freaked out when I'm talking to strangers online so I'm trying to keep this seacret! story's going good by the way! You might want to put a text dwn the bottom with what's coming next. eg. What next ? More arguments on the best way to shoot! |
Greenwood girl chapter 8 . 9/1/2014 Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/1/2014 Love it! |
Greenwood girl chapter 3 . 9/1/2014 YESSSS! It a long one yay! |
Teithril chapter 20 . 5/21/2014 Great chapter and ending! I'm a bit confused though since in the last chapter you had wrote that they had been training for 8 months and then in this chapter you wrote (as Legolas thoughts) that they had known each other only 3 short months. Just confused me a little. Am Enjoying your story immensely though! |
Teithril chapter 16 . 5/21/2014 You surprised me with this chapter...in such a good way! Love the unexpected scenario with them & that Lord Elrond acted like an annoyed father. Nice to see you kept Legolas IC with his reactions and feelings. Great job! |
Teithril chapter 7 . 5/21/2014 Even though you knew Legolas was going to choose her, it was still very sweetly written. Honestly don't think there could be a better way to write this chapter. |
Teithril chapter 4 . 5/21/2014 Loving the story so far! Only thing is that Legolas has grey eyes in the books and blue eyes in the movies. Not green eyes. |
Baby doll chapter 15 . 4/4/2014 Memories eh? I knew something was up! |
ElenaCake chapter 4 . 2/10/2014 The story has been great so far I love the fact that Valia is a tomboy and not a swooning dingbat elf princess |
InactiveYall2020 chapter 34 . 1/29/2014 Such a beautiful story! Even though nearly 11 years have past since you wrote this it is definitely one of the best fan fictions I've read and I hope you get this review. Also many thanks for a non-depressing ending. When people were saying how it was kind of like A Walk to Remember I was prepared for heart wrenching tragedy. Time to read the sequel! |
Larisya chapter 13 . 12/17/2013 Aww! They're so sweet! |
Larisya chapter 33 . 9/17/2013 This was amazing. Hantanyel. |
Gwen Elfy Greenleaf chapter 33 . 7/19/2011 I know you wrote this in, like, 03, but I came across it one day an began reading it. It is so good! You could be a really successful author, you know. Anyway, I got addicted and read it constantly until I was done. Other than some basic grammatical issues and a few spelling errors, this is pretty much a book, certainly bestseller quality. The sort of descriptors that you use to describe expressions and motions bring them to life better than many books that I have read. I am actually writing this after re-reading it, because it's so good. This was the first fanfiction that I read all the way through, and no matter how I search and where, none have met the standards your story placed in my mind. I don't know whether you even check reviews on old stories, but if you do, here's my email: yes, I am more than slightly obsessed with LotR and, specifically, (of course,) Legolas. But you probably got that in every awestruck review ever written in this story, so I am most likely boring you. I am currently off to re-read the sequel! Thank you for writing this! ~Gwen, called by her friends Elfy and who made Greenleaf be her unofficial last name. :) |