|Reviews for The Sergeant and the Shopkeeper|
| Ex2See chapter 4 . 1/1/2016
Why is he talking to Peeta?
| EStrunk chapter 4 . 1/1/2016
Gale's assumption makes sense in a sort of horrible way. I loved their interaction at the beginning. Can't wait to hear Madge's response.
| EStrunk chapter 3 . 12/24/2015
I hope there is more coming soon. This is breaking my heart. He's right that he needs to drop some of his stubbornness. Apparently she does too. Hers may be more defensiveness, although they are so closely related. I did like his line about "it's just a hand."
| LadyLetters chapter 2 . 12/24/2015
Nice story, sounds like a good chance of an HEA.
Some issues with head hopping in chapter 2 but separating off POV in cH 3 shows you are aware of that yourself. Occasionally stilted dialogue, try reading aloud to check if it sounds natural.
Overall a fun idea and a chance for Gale to redeem himself.
| Ex2See chapter 3 . 12/23/2015
Please continue this, it just got better.
| Ex2See chapter 2 . 12/22/2015
So what really happened between Madge & Gale?
| Ex2See chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
Aww cute, but what's their back story?
| Lara1221 chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
I like this. Different and fun and In character. Good job so far :)
| Hawtsee chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
Love this. I can't wait to see if Madge will show at the meadow.
| Bubs chapter 1 . 12/17/2015
This sounds really interesting - I am really excited to see where this goes. Hope you update soon!