Reviews for Furores
Guest chapter 4 . 3/9/2016
Beautifully planned out. Brilliant use a tension and release, most stories of this genre would just keep pulling the tension making it unbearable to finish, the way you gave some scenes deep and pulls the reader out before going too deep with scene changes really made the heaviness lift away. You need to add some line breaks though, kinda takes away the immersion. But overall prefect balance of a drama and tragedy, the breathers really smoothen the plot and never lost any of the story. Magnificent work. Thank you for taking your time to write and share your story. Hope you're having a good day.
Agent Grayson chapter 4 . 2/16/2016
PAIN, PAIN, PAIN! WHYYYYYY? That story was really good and REALLY, REALLY heartbreaking. SO MUCH PAIN! I'm gonna cry now, thanks.
~Grayson