Yeeessssss... Hannah was always a low-key badass. You see where Jane/John gets it honestly.

That spine of solid steel, core of iron.

And yes! Drack was cool if misguided in canon, and I'm super-thrilled to see him on the hunt for Jane. She'll be in good hands for sure.

Very interesting story, do continue!

okkk

wow wtf what happen?

Trigger warnings are dumb. This isn't Tumblr.

A lot of people have headcanon about humanity hiding away for the next cycle, but it's not at all clear that this would have worked.

We know from Javik that the reapers stay around for centuries after taking the Citadel to confirm their reaping and destroy most/all signs of their existence (at least if there is still resistance).

There are also suggestions that they monitor civilization levels, and given the alternative usages of the Citadel, it's very possible that they have ways to assess humanity's tech/societal readiness through the Mass Relays (the probability of this rather high given the implied number of cycles).

Once Jack Harper dies, it's only a matter of time before the Prothean Ruins are discovered on Mars, and if that happens in the centuries before the Reapers leave, then First Contact will extinction.

So those are good reason for Jack to not just wait around and hope for the best, supporting your AU.

Second it this time reading through this. Still missing this story a lot; I realize we’ll probably never get more updates, but it can’t hurt to wish. This story shows do much growth and promise and I just want to see the rest of the crew catch up with Wrex, Jack and Jane.

My interest plummeted down, I came here for Wrex.
I hope you don't add any more time travelers.
I'll read and see...

Well it's too bad this is dead, I never thought to look at wrex centric stories and I must say this is much better then most other ME on this site.

If it ever comes back, I'll be waiting

So, are you ever going to revisit this one, or are you too busy writing porn instead of good plots?

You haven't lost your talent for plot entirely, have you? Too much time spent writing Turians being every possible version of sexy or humans being railed by Krogan (somehow) probably withered it.

hope this updates

Was never a fan of Samara, she kinda bored me, so these chapters with her involvement also kinda bore me.

An amazing fic

This became my favourite ME fic within the first few chapters. I didn't expect to like this story quite that much; will I like Wrex as a supporting character, I just couldn't see him as a protagonist. But your Wrex as fantastic, as is your Jack Harper. It's funny how a tragic backstory can turn a hated antagonist to a likeable protagonist (though the time travel redemption arc definitely plays a role as well).
Of course I couldn't wait for Shepard to come back, and now I can't wait to see her get away from the batarians. Hopefully, you'll come back to writing some day!

This fanfic is fucking awesome. How in the hell did I not find this earlier?

Please keep writing this is awesome. Not that I'm implying that you didnt.

I love this so much.

-proud supporter