This chapter is great. The amount of laughing I did reading “Emperor” Harry’s interactions at the diplo summit nearly gave me a cramp! Keep up the good work!

I first read this story some years ago, got a bit lost as the plot lines started expanding but still loved it. Re-read through this last chapter again cause I was bored and forgot how entertaining the story was. Probably going to go back and reread the whole thing now. Keep at it, you got something great here!

so, I just out of curiosity went to your profile (intending to check out your other stories, which I did and followed a few) and saw in the description for this story on your profile you mentioned something about not having a major plot "other than to involve the Vong" that you feel is needed before you can mark this as complete. First I hope I read that correctly and it's saying you do not want to involve the Vong (personally I think of their introduction to now Legends material as a horrible idea and it completely killed my interest in much of the, now, legends material). Secondly, I am curious if you have Disney Streaming and have watched any of the "tv" shows they have made: Mandalorian, Kenobi, Andor, Something about Boba Fett, and the newest one actually about Ahsoka, and I think there may be yet another animated series .. Resistance or something that is set after Endor/features fight against the First Order. Personally, I have only gotten around to watching some of Mandalorian but have read a bit about further aspects than I have watched in that show, and at least the descriptions of some of the other shows. My point is that if you get a chance to watch some of those, you may be able to cherry pick out some bits and plots from the shows to add elements of into this story if you're looking for some plot. "The Mandalorian," and possibly the Boba Fett shows have some info on how the Mandalorians were treated by the Empire and what happened to them after the empire collapsed, and I am sure a bit of supplemental Legends content could add a bit more/different aspect to them- the point being that Harry could have his Potter Luck lead him to somehow revive the Mandalorian society/create a whole new faction for the galaxy. After all, with the Empire shattered and various warlords popping up and going conquering, that sounds like the perfect environment for Mandalorians to jump on, especially if Harry manages to somehow temper the battlelust and desire for conquest into having them be an actual stabilizing influence on their sphere of the galaxy. Not that I am all that sure how well Harry would get along with Mandalorian society. Still, an emergent Mandalorian faction would certainly shake things up a good bit within the galaxy.

love Hoth Earth in an ice age aspect

When I tead the Title I knew that it would be kind of cracky. but THIS is amazing. A fucking Deathstar. That's Awesome

You'll know that Warlord Zsinj controlled 200 Imperial Star Destroyers along with his 10000 worlds, including Coruscant. It's not clear, if the New Republic has retaken it, in your story. Since you gave the territory to Mara Jade and by extension Emperor Harry, he's got a border with the Hutts, who want him dead for killing Jabba, the Mandaloreans who don't like anyone and see his holding of Dathomir as easy pickings and the Galactic Remnant that also hates him. Oh and the New Republic's not that fond of him either.

Dathomir has the rancors. They're just misunderstood and probably are the least dangerous of a list of species that top galactic hunters would lose against. There are humans, zabraks, Witches and their potions and a few nightsiders. It was home to the Frompath, allegedly driven from it. There are a number of old bases; the Zeffonians, Ventress, CIS, Sith and mining companies that fell to the fauna and flora. The mother lode is that Dathomir was the home of the Kwa. The main Star Temple and Stargate err infinity gate is located somewhere on the planet. The Kwa are of course extinct. Then there's the remains of the Jedi training ship that crashed about 8 generations ago. There would have been survivors from the crash who had children, in my opinion.

What has Han got to persuade Harry to leave Leia alone. He does have the deeds to Dathomir that he won in a sabacc game. He could offer to trade them for her. After Luke and Leia have finished with the Byss, Leia and Han could begin their grooming to take over from Mon Mothma and Luke be designated New Republic liaison to Harry's empire to work with Mara Jade.

Thrawn's appearance showed what a competent leader could do with Imperial forces, so why would the new Republic sign a treaty with the Imperial Remnant? It permanently shut them off from the IBC on Muunlist.

I'd like to see Harry having to deal with Thrawn, the Mandaloreans, Hutts and the Emperor on his second clone posing as his own son, as well as issues on Dathomir. I hope I have given you some inspiration to continue the story - I really don't trust the Alderaanians (in your story); question is, does Harry?

And like that it's over. Good read.

this is the second or third time I've read this since you've changed the beginning kind of miss the ghost scene in Phoenix Bass but I still enjoy your story don't know if or when you'll update again but I look forward to it if and when it happens either way thank you for taking the time to share your Muse with us

I was enjoying it right up to the part where he starts going dark. Also the whole drama with the princess should have ended when he got luke back and he determined han did the deed

eh, I'd rather Harry have Leia than Solo. It's sad when you think about it but Solo can't even keep one girl properly happy. With Harry being how he is he could keep multiple happy just because the ones he cares for take priority for him.

My favourite part of this chapter?

The author's note obviously, author you rock.

Oh and your story is pretty good too.

And now i finally got around to reading the update, and re-edited version. Much improve.
In my first read-through, there were a few issues that bothered me, i don't remember if i told you or not, but they're no longer there. This ending with the more vigorous negotiations and the Grand Fake was just brilliant. While that kind of scene in a story usually bores me unless they have clear plot implications, this one just worked. Time has passed. People have grown. Adults frequently partake in adult things. I mean, Zeltron as a whole is more or less forgotten lore by now, and the modern SW-fans seem to believe Luke and Leia were conceived immaculately.
They weren't.
Imagine how great a force user would be in bed..:) It's like anything adult themed has to be relegated to crime, violence or slavery in any combination.
I actually find the interactions between the ex-Sith and our displaced Mage somewhat realistic.
She's gorgeous and sociopathic. She will use whatever she can for influence and power, and if it's enjoyable, why hold back? He's a guy. He has one brain, and one boneless appendage and only enough blood to run one at a time. Still, he's done a fairly good job.
No, socially speaking you've made a well reasoned story. I just love the unbearably political Mothma, for instance.
Insert whiny flames about the story not being completed already, even though i want it to be.
You can even add foot stompings and threats to hold my breath 'til i turn blue if you want..:)

Good job. I'll look in on this one every now and then
GL

This was a fun read hopefully you continue this somewhere down the road. Cheers!

you know basic is English right

Dead at chapter 18

Yea! for the Threesome!

I was disappointed earlier when Jade threw off the imperius because Harry ordered her to take off her top! (because that meant she didn't want to do that. If she had wanted to, she would not have bothered throwing off the imperious)