|Reviews for When the Day is Over|
| Drake Zeppeli chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Good job. You earned my respect. Nothing to criticize. Returning to base.
Dr. Drake Mars Saegsopon
Moderator of Pen to Paper
| Senorita Lucha 777 chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Excellent use of the New Faces team from the King of Fighters '97!
| Nisa Benthon chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
Good first story! I loved de structure. It was clean, without doubts.
I wrote some fics about KOF, but theyre in portuguese.
| Strike To Incinerate chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Oh, I like romance. It was nice to see Kyo paired with YUKI, HIS GIRLFRIEND, for once (even though I NEVER do it). The Shingo/Kasumi was nice (again, I'm not a big fan of that pairing, but hey, it's cute).
The only parts that really threw me off were: That the New Faces Team's band is called CYS, and that Iori was interested in Kyo and Yuki's relationship.
Other than that, good job.
| Let The City Turn chapter 1 . 11/12/2003
Interesting. I enjoyed it.
| Vulpixi Misa chapter 1 . 3/27/2003
That was pretty cool, although I don't like Yuki very much, but that was cool.
| DilaZirK chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
Nicely written! And the song could not have been more appropriate!
| googoodo11z chapter 1 . 1/8/2003
i enjoyed ur story, and i feel what ur trying to go with it. i wished it could be a bit longer though.
a softer side to yagami, fascinating.