Reviews for Lunch Rush
Jewellery Bits chapter 1 . 5/14
Man, I wish there were more
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
Cute :):):)
x-myriad-of-dreams-x chapter 1 . 7/14/2017
Dusky Spirit chapter 1 . 3/2/2017
This story is adorable!
ascarletflame chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
omg SO CUTE. the (reason for the) card thing was hilarious haha
celtic-booty chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
This was the most adorable fanfiction I have ever read in my whole life. Everything was so pure and cute and Natsu was so adorable! Thank you for this!
Maya chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
Hilarious! The ending just killed me :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
oh dear god you had me at the erza card part
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Ohh~! It's so cuti **
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Your dialogue is always great. Baby!Natsu was hilarious.
boogey56 chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
This prompt is so cute. Haha but blunt!Natsu's the same no matter how old he is. For some reason, Natsu comparing Jellal to a 'naughty puppy' made me laugh though.
The Silver Tongued Alpha chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Awe! Natsu is too adorable. Man I could not have a kid, or a sibling like Natsu. Unforntunately I have three. Lol they are a handful. That was so cute and I liked the switches from Natsu to Jellal and Erza. And an Erza card?! Oh I love it!
"Do you get lost a lot?"
"You're defecting."
"Deflecting?" Lol! Too funny gods I would've been like "no you're defecting! With all these nosy questions!" Lol it would've been a trip. I think imma need to get my sister Erza cards. And my mother lol.
qurz058 chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
CUTEST THING EVER! I mean, you always write cute stuff (or smoking hot) but this THIS IS particularly super cute!
Me chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Awww so cute