Good story, I hope some day you do write the sequel. Callen letting down his guard with a Comescu could be quite a tale.

Good ending. Some issues on the wording or spelling, but it didn't prevent the enjoyment of the story. I liked it. Is there a sequel? Will there be?

Nice story. Loved it

Nice one. Something is always yup with Hetty. There's always something more

Great ending for a great story! Love the possibility of a future story. Callen of course is Callen right up until the end. Annoying and stubborn! So glad he is going to take a chance with Nika. It just could be his salvation.

You've left it with a possibility of a sequel? Glad she and G were OK in the end. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you. This is a perfect (open) end for a great story.
In your stories Callen is how I like him very very much.
His weakness and his determination; you are very good in showing/writing both.
Thank you for your time and effort.

Hey thanks. never a boring installment. What do you mean might do a sequel? Are you going to leave me hanging? I wanted Callan and Nika, well Nichole now to get together. Sorry about her arm though. Lets know what happen further. Thanks for a great, action story. You are a good writer,. Thanks again.

I've enjoyed the ride. Thank you for another story about our man. I'd like to see that sequel someday.

And the imagination takes over from there. Brilliant! Thank you for this treasure of a story; my only regret is that it's over. Awesome job.

Thank you for this open ending. No sugar-sweet story, makes it easy to use the own imagination. Well done!

That is a very fine ending to a wonderful story. Maybe those two even have a future together

Sad that this story is almost over. I loved it. And this chapter just shows that you put so much thoughts and insides into your stories and characters.

Thank you

Loved it! Sorry to see the story end

So we are nearing the end and yet for Callen it never really seems to end. The Comescus are always around. I detect a relationship perhaps with Nika which would be good for him and all his issues. I also detect Hetty behind all this. She is always manipulating his life and career when she can. Once again Callen has taken on the Comescus and won.