Reviews for Fat Boy
RedDragon30000 chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
This is such a heartbreaking story, everything seems to happen to poor Harvey! It was interesting to see how many survival skills SPLAT and Harvey has picked up through their years at the school. They are well aware that if they attempt to defend themselves or protest about what the Prefects do to them, they will be treated even more harshly. They are in an environment where no-one will take their side and everyone regards them as troublemakers, so they all have to keep their heads down. This is shown when Ingrid stopped herself having a go at Jeff for what he said and when Lloyd reminded her silently not to retaliate.

In this story, just when it seems that Jeff can't do anything worse to him, he calls Harvey 'fat' and 'piggy', thus setting off a horrible chain reaction where Harvey's self-esteem is reduced to nothing and causes him first to want to stop eating anything at all, fearing more taunts, then makes him go the otherway late that night, and eat constantly, embracing his image.
seriousblahblah chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
Canteen food is indeed awful, i lost my appetite just imagining the lumpy mashed potatos and green peas...and ouch who calls someone 'wheezy the pig'? Jeff is a capital jerk. though i wish harvey standed up for himself isntead of taking it out on food...it sounds like he might be developing an eating disorder, poor thing :(