I liked what you wrote much better than what the outline had. So glad you decided to change it up.

I’m not sure but I think Bella is being a tad uptight. She didn’t have to sleep with him or tongue kiss him before she knows him, but as his new wife a peck would have been appropriate and a little less attitude. Also. He’s a bit cocky but at least he’s being decent.

Awww man. I'm kinda sorry there's no future take of these two (well, three now). This was really cool. I understand where Bella was coming from. I too, at some point, only wanted to belong to someone in that safe, forever sort of way.
I'm glad she didn't go the other way and fought for her marriage because that man was worth it.
Thanks for sharing!

Amazing story! Wow! Couldnt stop reading!

I tried to find your fb page. AI wasn't clever enough and the regulat search is gone. I loved your writing style and loved your story. Thank you.

I'm not a big fan of angst, and your orginal ending would have been predictable.

Love how the story turned out. The two of them got their dream. Edward showed how sweet and romatic he was.

Bella is doing the right by Mrs Cope. Going to be hard being away from each other.

That chef is as fake as can be.

No loan like you said. I feel bad Marcus is leaving.

I believe he did the honorable choice The company in turn did the same.

Oh thank goodness , glad he said how he felt.

Ugh Vicky at the party. I don't see how withut a bank loan she'll get the money

Now I'm worried about the secret.

Yesss