|Reviews for A Journey Of A Thousand Miles|
| Raj8 chapter 6 . 1/30
I just finished reading the entire story, while it's a shame to see that it's been abandoned I had a blast reading the entire thing.
I think this is probably my favorite Hachiman/Saki story out there because it takes such a realistic portrayal of the two characters and shows moments of there relationship that feel so real.
I see you've stopped writing completely on FFN which is disappointing to see, I hope that your doing well and that your still writing. Who knows maybe you've gone on and written an amazing original story by now. Best of Wishes - Raj
| Lifelessman chapter 6 . 8/29/2019
Good Work...! 6
I need for more chapters...!
| Lifelessman chapter 5 . 8/29/2019
Good Work...! 5
| Lifelessman chapter 4 . 8/29/2019
Good Work...! 4
| Lifelessman chapter 3 . 8/29/2019
Good Work...! 3
| Lifelessman chapter 2 . 8/29/2019
Good Work...! 2
| Lifelessman chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
Good Work...! 1
| Lordlexx chapter 6 . 5/20/2019
You're a very bad word for not continuing this.
| lose chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
Ugh this is a really cute story so far. Not sure how I've never stumbled across this one until now!
| ickaser chapter 3 . 7/5/2018
The conflict between Yukinoshita and Kawasaki felt very sudden and unexpectedly...harsh, I guess is te word? But I think it was honestly fine.
The fluff with Hikigaya also felt a little weird to me, like he was suddenly less awkward and prickly than usual. But you know what, as I see it, the point of fanfiction is that it diverges somewhat from wat the author gives us and that's what I'm here for, so I have nothing to complain about.
Good job overall!
| ickaser chapter 2 . 7/5/2018
One malapropism (mixed up saying) I noticed: you say a character "clamped up" a couple times, which isn't quite right. The word is "clammed up", like a clam closing shut and being impossible to open. I think you're mixing it up with "clamped [his, my, etc.] mouth shut".
The more you know!
I didn't notice anything too egregiously OOC. You did a good job toning down the inner monologues so it didn't sound like Hikigaya, but keeping it up in line with the way Kawasaki does freeze in conversation. Nicely done!
| ickaser chapter 1 . 7/5/2018
Holy cow, good job. This pairing is so far out of canon that I wouldn't have very high expectations for avoiding some OOC bits, but you did a good job. Also, I felt like this was Watari himself writing-you really nailed his style. Like, dang. (Also, your writing is clean. I'm a fairly picky native English speaker, but nothing stuck out to me as wrong.)
| keeny2002 chapter 2 . 4/16/2018
trigonometry is mathematics not science
| Lordlexx chapter 6 . 4/7/2018
You need to finish this...
| Senpai2342 chapter 6 . 12/21/2017