Reviews for The Temptation of Severus Snape
riverrat1 chapter 1 . 7/24
Loved this story! Very sexy and steamy. Great story line and I like your way of writing.
There is just one thing that you may want to fix. When Severus first shows up at her door you say: "She wasn't sure what to say as he closed the door with his boot." Then a little further down you say: "As he reached his hands down to unfasten his trousers he kicked the door closed."
Basically you had Severus close the door twice. Fix it and this story will be perfect :-)
robituputup chapter 1 . 2/28
Hot! :D Thank you for the great reading piece!
SharpMaz chapter 1 . 1/30
This is great! So sexy and fantastic!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2017
So hot! I wish it was a couple more chapters! Thank you for sharing!
Al chapter 1 . 12/12/2016
If it's possible,could you write a sequel that explains his house arrest? And give his point of view of this story?
CrazySlytherin chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
love it
Snapes-star chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
Just, wow! Fucking amazing story! I really really enjoyed it! It's going straight to my favorites.
PiffyEQ chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
That was hot!
sevslave1 chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Light, funny, sexy and smutty!
Janene1975 chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
Awesome!
Argonautka chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
I LOVE this story! It is great, and storyline is well-considered!
Dobbysrightsock chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
This was super cute and super hot and fantastic and I want to read more.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
Smoking hot tease fest, thank you for sharing!
OnlyAMonster chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
"Give me your seed" God damnit I died. Adding this story to my favorites though. It was very entertaining and different :) Merry Christmas
DADAMistress chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
Aw, that was lovely. Thank you & merry Christmas! :D
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