Not a bad story so far, however I do worry that Maria might go Light Side. Also Oren was a bit too obvious. Looking forward to how the Black Talon will be handled.

... dude, I NEEDED this fanfiction to exist. I love the legacy you're setting up in the first chapter with the sisters, especially since one of them is more than likely to be the Jedi knight.

If you do maintain this establishment of each class then the inevitable convergence will be awe inspiring. Heck, I believe they will even establish the eternal alliance by the end (I leave it to you which one will take the lead, but I feel like making team "8 of fate" will be a stronger alternative).

I'm sorry for gushing, but suffice it to say you've inspired me. I would gladly volunteer my support towards making this go further. Whatever you do, good luck and have fun. Thank you again for your contribution.

So glad to see this story update! I hope to see more from you!

I do love how he likes and understands the Sith Code, all but the first line.

Damn, i reaally liked this. I love the more realistic take on the story and i really like your protagonist, definately wanna ee some more of this ;)

I liked the chapter I hope you will continiue it.

Very well done in deed, though you may want to copy and paste it into google drive to check for spelling and grammer, some sections could use a touch up.

This start good can't wait to see moe

great story

This is quite an intriguing idea. I can see him being related to a Jedi Knight and Jedi Consular.

I really liked this take on how the slave inquisitor discovers their force sensitivity.

I'll be looking forward to updates of this story with anticipation. I have a sense for skilled writers, even if it's only one chapter, and I think if you keep up with this story it'll be amazing. I particularly liked how you started out with his family and how they had been separated.

That you thought up a quality backstory alone makes this a story worth watching.

good start, when doy you continue with the story