Reviews for Restoration
pcctwiff231 chapter 28 . 3/25
I loved the entire trilogy! You told us at the beginning that there would be more sex than plot but you took that flippant statement and gave us more! So for that, we happily got more out of it.
pcctwiff231 chapter 5 . 3/24
Chapter 5: Awwwww, Garrett! And quadruple the awwww knowing that your Garrett is Stephen Amell! You've ruined all other Garretts in all of Twilight Fan Fiction for me now... because now there's no one else who can be Garrett other than Stephen! And I picked up on him holding a bow and arrow... hit, even if he's in diapers... coz he's the Green Arrow!lol
magmom4 chapter 28 . 2/23
I liked the third installment the best. I was enjoying the last chapter when it ended on me. Great story. Oh. I had the baby's name as Charles Garrett but I didn't know his middle name.
sapphicist chapter 4 . 7/18/2017
Ok so I have something very important to comment on. In the dialogue where Marcus is speaking about how he doesn't care about one of his partners being gay, etc., you used some transphobic language. Unintentional, I'm sure. Marcus saying "his son thinks he's a girl" is actually borderline condescending. And then, for Marcus to mention his child identifying as female but using he/him pronounces is very disrespectful & transphobic. You could have had Marcus say something like "do I care that my child has told me they are trans/transgender?" It's much more respectful to trans people and their gender identities. Especially because, if Marcus knows his child identifies as female, his child would have already talked to him about this kind of info to make her feel more comfortable with her gender identity known to her parent. These are little (but very important) details. You never know, you may have trans readers and stuff like this can be hurtful even when that was never the intent. And even if Marcus's kid turns out to not want to identify as female but is just in tune with feminine things or whatever have you (I know this is really just something mentioned in passing ultimately), but it's still best to use caution. Language is powerful! And I only comment on it as knowledge to have in the future when writing, and if you ever decide to make mention of trans people/identities in future stories. And because I personally enjoy learning things to challenge my world view. So again, I'm not trying to be some uppity know it all sdflksdj.

And I hope I'm not coming off badly, I'm really loving this fic trilogy I promise, lol! The smut is hot (and well done) and I love your writing. I'll definitely be checking out your other stories after finishing this.
edwardisaputz chapter 27 . 6/26/2017
Hit enter before finished my review on epilogue: I wish we got more of Garret and Kates life. Know this is basically an Edward and Bella story in the end but he was an important part and I wanted to know more about his HEA and their baby. Again, overall, great job
edwardisaputz chapter 28 . 6/26/2017
I really enjoyed this series. Your characters were well developed and the situations they were in were very believable. Having several poly friends the terror of being 'outed' at work is a real thing for them. Your lemons were very well done and my wife thanks you for the effect they had on me :) . Look forward to reading more of your work
edwardisaputz chapter 23 . 6/26/2017
Not of big fan of the 'miracle pregnancy' as it seems to run rampant in fanfic but this was handled pretty well. Bella's reaction was pretty genuine. Two family members had similar reactions when they found out they were pregnant after being told that the chances of hitting the lottery were better than them becoming pregnant or carrying to term. Both had healthy babies. Good job. Love this series
keshaluvsRob chapter 15 . 3/22/2017
I love Garret
keshaluvsRob chapter 14 . 3/22/2017
One more time
keshaluvsRob chapter 13 . 3/22/2017
Lucky girl indeed
keshaluvsRob chapter 11 . 3/22/2017
I do too! So hawt!
keshaluvsRob chapter 10 . 3/22/2017
Citrus time!
keshaluvsRob chapter 9 . 3/22/2017
Kinky Bella!
keshaluvsRob chapter 8 . 3/22/2017
Omg... she got tatoos about them
keshaluvsRob chapter 7 . 3/22/2017
I hope she'd say yes to Marcus
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