Reviews for Bite Of The Hyena!
sam stewart chapter 1 . 4/17/2018
please continue this story soon.
christopherrhaydon chapter 1 . 1/12/2018
bcsclaymore chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
nice start, can't wait to see why her mother is neglecting her and what her reaction will be to the new her:)
Darkmoon Overlord chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
...WTF did I just read?

Ahem...moving on. Okay, the idea has merit...but srsly...this seemed like it was thrown together in a hurry without too much thought or trying to put way too much at once. Plus, you have too many extremely large paragraphs...split them up some, please. It's better to take more time and space things out and lead up to the overall ideas you are seeding in a story. Try to rethink this one and add more content and depth in your chapters and you should do fine.
guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
No one gives a fuck about your loser self-insert OCs. Kill yourself.