Reviews for The Dark Lord's Equal |
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![]() ![]() Please come back and write more for this fic. It's awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow he really fixated on having to choose a single horcrux. he's liking his perspective way too much. |
![]() ![]() I really like this story and I hope you haven't given up onit and will return to write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore harry in hufflepuff and for people to not read because of that shows that they don’t care much for reading or plot in general |
![]() ![]() ![]() J'adore, j'ai hâte d'avoir et de lire la suite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story, but please write a little less about how everyone loves Harry so much they immediately would die for him or how Harry always thinks about how they’re his. It’s just a little bit too much and repetitive. And perhaps you can describe Harry as a little less perfect, a little more human, that would make the story better as well, I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As far as I know it wasn’t Albus who caught Snape listening and threw him out but Aberforth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() if you want to post that on any of your story's in the future you have my permission |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story is going great but I will say this to people that disagree with story. it's not only the story it self that they need to think about but the decisions that the character of any story that builds what happens. just as the multiverse thiroy is thought to be in the world of fanfiction. so dose it count in the world we live in so we wather or not the readers like the story or not. I say let the writers do what comes to them. other wise the story may not come to make since in the first place. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope this story isn't dead it's very good so far. |
![]() ![]() PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE; LOVE THE STORY |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I genuinely love this story so so so so much. It is so different from any story I’ve read in this vein and I hope against hope u will update this again |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a bit disappointed with the choice of house. When you said your decision in the beginning of the chapter, i knew that it would be different. I kind of already knew that this fanfic was going to be different, and that Harry was NOT going to be placed in Slytherin or Gryffindor. I was just kind of hoping for maybe Ravenclaw, you know? I kind of understand why you put him there, but I was really hoping for this one to be a good fanfic. I won't judge the outcome of the story by just one detail, so I will continue reading for the reason of the TR/HP slash. I really hope that this turns out better, because this fanfic has a lot of potential. Just a little sad with your decision, but I know that can't be changed with already 26 chapters out. |
![]() ![]() I hope you haven't given up on this story. It's good. |