Reviews for Children of the Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wish this had more chapters. sad to see it abandoned while you write other things |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Harry is just too nice. I love him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It will still remain in my favorites and be read again now and then. A well thought out plot with believable characterizations and lots of complexity, twists and turns. Really love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you never write another chapter for this story, it |
![]() ![]() Cissa’s being rude… |
![]() ![]() That’s a nice start to what sounds like a marvelous story. |
![]() ![]() This needs to be finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you probably already have alot of people demanding an update for this beautiful story that you have written and I hope that I'm not overstepping my place but I was wondering if you could give me an estimate on how long it might be before you update the next chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() continue this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry has a strong and wily protector in Severus (who may whip up some of that poison just as a backup plan, he's no fool). Minerva will shield Harry as well. Not so sure that Amelia Bones will; she's already preparing to free Albus just to keep her position. Also, Golden. Don't miff off a golden protector... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that's a neat idea-turn the artificial familiars into real ones (you would think Albus would have had enough time to do so, more than anyone else with an artificial familiar...but I expect you would have to *love* the familiar, too and not just use it). I'm glad the thought has come up. Or they're going to have to lose their Squibs. Wizarding society now knows how many Squibs they have, more or less, but I expect they didn't really want to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, Severus is going to say, 'but Albus has been on me all this time to worship Harry Potter, and of course you want to change now. Besides, Albus hated it when he saw I cared for my own students'. And Minerva knows it. Besides, she was never very happy in canon when Snape didn't bend over backwards for Harry either. I wonder how the Heisenberg laws came about in the first place. Was it when people like Tom were thrown into London during the Blitz? I wonder if Snape was refused sanctuary when he was a student? At least Minerva does care about individual students-good for her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes. There is something horribly wrong about the way the WW treats both Squibs and Muggles; but what, if anything will change now? 'All was well'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story! It is well written and with an interesting plot. Looking forward to reading the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, please update! |