Reviews for Children of the Sun |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you probably already have alot of people demanding an update for this beautiful story that you have written and I hope that I'm not overstepping my place but I was wondering if you could give me an estimate on how long it might be before you update the next chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() continue this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry has a strong and wily protector in Severus (who may whip up some of that poison just as a backup plan, he's no fool). Minerva will shield Harry as well. Not so sure that Amelia Bones will; she's already preparing to free Albus just to keep her position. Also, Golden. Don't miff off a golden protector... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that's a neat idea-turn the artificial familiars into real ones (you would think Albus would have had enough time to do so, more than anyone else with an artificial familiar...but I expect you would have to *love* the familiar, too and not just use it). I'm glad the thought has come up. Or they're going to have to lose their Squibs. Wizarding society now knows how many Squibs they have, more or less, but I expect they didn't really want to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, Severus is going to say, 'but Albus has been on me all this time to worship Harry Potter, and of course you want to change now. Besides, Albus hated it when he saw I cared for my own students'. And Minerva knows it. Besides, she was never very happy in canon when Snape didn't bend over backwards for Harry either. I wonder how the Heisenberg laws came about in the first place. Was it when people like Tom were thrown into London during the Blitz? I wonder if Snape was refused sanctuary when he was a student? At least Minerva does care about individual students-good for her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes. There is something horribly wrong about the way the WW treats both Squibs and Muggles; but what, if anything will change now? 'All was well'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story! It is well written and with an interesting plot. Looking forward to reading the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story, please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good to find out what is happening with the familiars. And yet, what is magical society going to do with so many revealed Squibs? Create a reservation for them? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that's really interesting that people besides Albus can create gold or silver familiars. Of course, because I like to leap straight ahead, I wonder if Tom Riddle managed it somehow? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmm...Severus is wrong about Flitwick, since we all know that Filius ignored what happened to Luna at the hands of her own classmates, but I suppose Snape doesn't know about that part. But Narcissa would definitely bear watching. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really feel for Hermione-she tries so hard to fit in it hurts to watch her try. And Harry has so much confidence, from being a golden and being nurtured in Hufflepuffl. Yes, the news about Dumbledore is dreadful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my, the fewmets will hit the fan once this whole issue of artificial familiars gets raised. The adults will need the prestige of someone with a golden familiar to listen to them in the first place... And I suspect Harry will regret trusting Professor Quirrell, but that's for a later chapter. |
![]() ![]() Great job its amazing. -_- |
![]() ![]() Dead story. Sad. |