Reviews for Children of the Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "Whoever said life was easy was attempting to sell you something." ~ Dread Pirate Roberts paraphrased quote from The Princess Bride. How far gone may White Bee be after his stay in the Dream Labyrinth? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's very interesting about my friend Claire! Surprised she had a tin horse and not a white hound, mind you. And even more interesting about the corrupted familiars. And Snape knows just enough to be terrified. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, asking Professor Snape is a good idea; even with a silver familiar, he knows what it's like at the bottom of the food chain, and he'll be able to see where Narcissa is coming from by a country mile, and be able to safeguard Harry from it. Quirrelmort is the real threat right now, though, and should be dealt with first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter! Great to see that section wrapped up, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go from here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is Golden having to communicate with Harry in an interpretive way instead of just speaking Parseltounge? I know you had Harry talk to other reptile familiars earlier in the story but I can't remember if they ever spoke back. So why is speaking one way? Shouldn't at least the snakes be able to speak Parseltounge? |
![]() ![]() I feel so tense knowing Dumbledore is going to appear again hahaha. ' LOVE all of the characters of this chapter, specially Minerva and Julian, but your Madam Bones is so interesting too! Everywhere I look is just. Great. Thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() Fantastic story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of course Dumbledore had to carry his way out of the Dream Labyrinth! Great scenario as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Se o Albus tiver que ser liberado espero um grandiosa humilhação e que depois ele volte para a punição dele sem grandes estragos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() eu amo essa história com tudo de mim. espero ansiosamente por cada atualização. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah. WHOAH. I am freaking out right here. What a STORY! I *thought* that the Dream Labyrinth potentially-wouldn't hold Albus Dumbledore since his familiar was not originally golden, but I never *dreamed* that the Ministry would be seriously considering opening the door just to see whether his familar was marked as fake! Actually. There's a lot of idiots in the Ministry. Strike that - reverse it. I should have seen it coming. I absolutely love this story, and it's always a joy whenever you update. It's a wonderful idea and it's brilliantly-executed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good to see an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry enters more and more into politic, and it’s not an easy nor safe thing… I really hope that Dumbledore familiar was marked, it would be horrible if not (and not very logic too) This chapter was really cool, thanks ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, Dumbledore is not to get out! Oh my! You left on such a cliff hanger! I guess I have no choice but to wait for the next chapter. Until next time. |