Reviews for And Then There Was Light
whytewytch chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
Sparky, I love your ideas! I think you really need to pull them in for a close, sloppy, bear-hug, though. I feel like you gloss over a lot of great chances for scenes that could really make us laugh or cry. You should also keep an eye on where you put your scene breaks-there were a couple of them that came in the middle of a scene and it was rather jolting. Keep it up! You're improving with every story.
LadyLorena chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Solid start! Will be awaiting your updates to see where you go from here. :)
Princess PrettyPants chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Wonderful story and I am curious to what Alan's reaction will be to the news that Edith is pregnant.
lokisgrl chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
You already know I love this. It's very well written and I can't wait to see it all play out!
Karen Frost chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
This was fantastic Elizabeth. Well done. X
Heather H-E chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Well worth the wait.I'm intrigued.I want to know how she handles knowing she's pregnant and how Allan deals with job :)
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