Reviews for Aftershocks
Usorokoaemo chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
Well, I must say that was nicely done. You caught the emotions extremely well and managed to keep the characters ic even when the plot changed a little.

A masterful piece.
Gen1 chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
Great story ,not really a fan fic but i like it.

Anyways I got to go and ryuu im the second person to reveiw
GeekRyuu chapter 1 . 1/8/2003
Dude! I get to be the first to review your story! (does a quick rendition of the Majin Buu happydance!) Like I said, I love this one to little bitty bits. It's a vast improvement on the original scene, wherein I felt that Goku badly needed to be whapped upside the head repeatedly. In this, he comes off as far less of a cretinous, well, cretin and thus avoids...the Wrath of Ryuu! _

Seriously, I enjoyed this muchly. Well done!