JUST ANOTHER THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY IN A STORY... SOMETHING SO MADE RIGHT IN THE WAY YOU BROUGHT THESE TWO TOGETHER!

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing!

I absolutely love your story. It is clever and provides twists and turns for each character. I love how you took side characters and gave them life and complexity. My only criticism is that you endure, indulge, and sometimes encourage the opinion of others when it is clear way too many think very highly of their own interpretation and their self-appointed right to inflict their judgement so harshly. I cringed every time your author's note included justification or apologies for your decisions. The joy of fanfiction comes from watching how authors create new journeys and sometimes paths that greatly differ from the original inspiration. Please do not feel you have to cater to those intent in using their criticism as a means to deflate your creativity.
I had to write this before reading the chapter. I look forward to how you will bring closer to each of their journeys. I secretly hope that Mr. Collins is forced to release Mrs. Collins due to his failure to be a man of integrity.
No matter what you decide, I thank you for your words. I have not been able to put them down.

Loving this story! Your Charlotte is such a wonderful character. Is it wrong that I’m impatiently waiting for Mr Collins to be struck down with a fatal illness?! The Colonel and Charlotte are the highlight of this for me. Thanks for the story.

This was such an amazing story. Thank you. I did enjoy Richards story and I’m glad it ended the way it did. It was a nice foil to Darcy and Elizabeth. Also I loved reading each witty disclaimer. Lizzy would be proud.

Very good story, full of imagination, adventure and twists. I just wish you didn't write anymore.

Excellente histoire bravo j ai adoré merci

I keep coming back to this story again and again to read it! It’s just so so excellent and the characters are so well developed and all the lovey scenes are so lovely! Definitely one of the best P&P stories I’ve ever read!

Just read this again. So, so good! High on my list of all-time P&P favorites...and I've read a ton of them. Awesome job!

What a wonderful adventure! Great dialogue and an imaginative, original plot. The Fitzwilliam and Charlotte romance was a true joy to read. I LOVED it!

Have you thought about putting it up on Amazon yourself?

:)

Ahh, I am so happy ColonelF and Charlotte got their HEA too.

Ha! I haven’t read this chapter yet, but just had to comment on your noteyes! Imagine the vitriol that proposal might have provoked! And Captain Wentworth flirting with Louisa! And Lady what’s-her-babe pushing Anne towards Mr Elliott!

For the record I love the Charlotte-Fitzwilliam dynamic, although perhaps he shouldn’t have said anything to her. But then, how could he not? I also don’t think I’ve noticed any inconsistencies. Except, I guess I was wondering whether Darcy told Fitzwilliam of the discussion he overheard (or did he have the discussion and Elizabeth overheard it?) just before they got off the boat. The implications all along have been that ‘Lord’ Smythe had no intention of doing them any harm (though I suppose it was not entirely clear of that was really true of Elizabeth, though I think it was, especially because I think he did see her leaving), but that if Reg was in charge things may be different.
So the only thing I would like to see for the sake of consistencies was a discussion about that and whether that should affect their plans or assumptions.