Reviews for Linked in Life and Love
DeafenedCeiling chapter 104 . 1/2
Hello, again. I thought it was weird how you said the next chapter would be out soon but then you disappeared, now we know why lol. Don't stress yourself over it. These things happen.

Ruby being speechless is kinda a cause for concern. She's NEVER speechless. Perhaps she just has things on her mind or maybe she's not used to being around Whitley but even then, she usually has SOMETHING to say, even if it's dumb. You would hope it's not part if a larger problem but I personally think it is but we won't know unless we see more. I do think it's funny that people automatically assume that when Ruby calls them they assume she's blown something up lol.

In any case, I do think Whitley istrying, it's just gonna take a bit. He may have been under his dad's influence, but he doesn't act like him at all. Thibk about it, his dad would not hesitate to be vile or ignorant of Faunus yet Whitley is. He listens to Weiss after so coaxing. If he was truly like his dad that would be unthinkable. He's not some demon, he's just scared. He's grown up thinking a certain way and now he's learning that was all wrong. Anyone would be confused after that. Basically what I'm saying is that Weiss should cut Whitley some slack. Shes wasn't perfect either when she was trying to change. He just needs some direction. Weiss came a long way to the point that she's even surprised how many friends she has. She had none going into Beacon so I'm sure she can relate.

This felt like a setup chapter for something bigger, which isn't a bad thing. We got to see more of Weiss and Whitley's dynamic and all in all, it's not bad. Like I said, hes rough around the edges but he does apologize and hes not a dick, just confused and scared. Plus, it's not like he had Winter and Weiss to help him. Both of them left him by himself to deal with their dad which is kinda unfair. While I can't fault them for doing so, realistically, you can't blame Whitley for being who he is, especially when hes trying. Good chapter. I patiently await the next one!
Mariticide chapter 104 . 1/2
it's always a great day when a new chapter is posted. Happy New Year and keep up the great work!
Sergeant Sargent II chapter 104 . 12/31/2024
happy new year!
Vorthod chapter 104 . 12/29/2024
Oh man, that author note sounds rough. That kind of stuff really sucks to go through even if it sounds minor out of context. Glad to see you back though. Happy nine years.
Corphicks814420 chapter 104 . 12/29/2024
Sooo….. the MY HERO ACADEMIA series is finally over, I’m pretty sure that gives you all the material you need to make sure you don’t need to constantly change things of your story DEKIRU to fit the original plot line.
Iiznelomviing chapter 104 . 12/29/2024
Thanks for the read! It is always fun to come back to this story!
TigerTrainerXD chapter 4 . 12/28/2024
I love how none of them thought to just break their front door down.
ArashiNokitsune chapter 104 . 12/28/2024
Weiss basically told her little brother she has game and when you think about it she ain't wrong she's dating three princesses if you really think about it considering Ruby and Yang's family and man is that hilarious the reaction Whitley is going to have is going to be epic
DarklightArk chapter 104 . 12/28/2024
Dang! Weiss just about killed her partners with that last comment, smooth as silk!
Honorthegam3r chapter 104 . 12/28/2024
So so cool, love it
W8W chapter 104 . 12/28/2024
Zwei continue to be hilarious.

Interrogating fanatic is real headache and while he will not betray he may slip something up accidentally during gloating.

Jacques is terrible parent. I knew that it is tragic but it lead to Whitley competence in social situation reach funny level. Him attending classes with RWBY is definitely funny.

I understand why Ilia is worried but I don't think that she will have problems.

Sienna and Ghira speech was nice and explain situation well.

Joke about dating three princesses was really good ending to the chapter.

I knew that it was unpleasant for you but story of how this chapter was delayed is funny for me.
Nagaichi chapter 104 . 12/27/2024
Hey, Im just happy youre writing it. Great story and I cant wait to see the interaction with Jaques.
Absurdum est chapter 104 . 12/27/2024
Did you hear that sound? That’s the sound of Whitley‘s world shattering to pieces around him. Neo‘s illusion couldn’t shatter as fully as his reality just did.
ExploerTM chapter 103 . 12/27/2024
I need to clarify: in previous encounter Tyrian behaved like a goddamn merc, in this he is dumb fanatic beyond any reason. Tyrian *is strong, smart and cunning*. He is Salem's personal assassin and absolutely terrifying fighter who goes toe to toe with the likes of Qrow and Clover, top dogs among the Huntsmen of Remnant. This character here is Tyrian in the name only.
ExploerTM chapter 104 . 12/27/2024
I kind not the fan of the latest arc

Tyrian keeps being complete miss handled, at this point rewrite him into random noname Salem worshipper because this clown isnt Tyrian.

Whitley has absolutely *cartoonish* reaction to Faunus. With what we've seen in later vols, are you seriously saying the kid who kept cool head when being hunter by sentient grimm would give anything but a glance at their features.
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