I am soo looking forward to your next update. I like how your going about the overall plot without getting too naughty.

I love this story. I feel like you are doing an amazing job with it and think it is awsome

But..but..smut is the best part of Pollination fics.

What? I did say they were my guilty pleasure after all.

If this is part of a whole, overall story there better be something about trying to keep the whole polyamory thing a secret. Or people finding out, like JNPR. Or Qrow and Taiyang. Oh god. What if Taiyang finds out? *shudders*

Good story. I like the the descriptions of her being in heat. Sudden impulses, burning desire, yes. Very good. Keep it up :)

I absolutely love this story so far. So many great ideas here that I can't wait to see you explore. I am very much looking forward to reading the next chapter, hopefully soon! Can't wait!

This is good. (Pollination stories are my guilty pleasure). The flash forward in the first chapter was a great hook.

I would have given Weiss a reaction to Blake kissing Ruby however. She does absolutely nothing when that happens and only Yang seems to care which is weird, because the kiss seemed to go on for quite a bit before Yang broke it up

Would I be correct in assuming Blake is in "heat"? With her being a cat Faunus, it only makes sense.