Reviews for Ups and Downs
whatweareafreaidof chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
I don't like this story at all. You made all the fight Ron fault. Most in canon were hermonie. Made Ron to simple only caring about food sport. You had Ron cheat. Had harry keeping them from fighting something he never did. And Harry love hermonie witch he never did. And somehow be a great boyfriend. Again something he was not. N
SereniteRose chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
loving this one-shot thanks ever so much.
jkarr chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
this a nice story
Rake1810 chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Really well written one-shot. A story like this is why i'm not always a fan of your harem stories. When you limit the number of characters and focus on them you do characterizations so well! I like Harry/multi but i always wish you kept the numbers lower so the stories would feel more like this where we learn more and get involved in their thinking rather then a glimpse from 5 different girls.
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Well that sucked, what with the whole thing with her parents; sorry!
LGilbert1982 chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
ah, how it should have been, lol.
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