Reviews for Bittersweet
Mr.Sylar chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
You tricked me... WHY?
Mentally Insane Fangirl chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
No offence...but that was stupid. You shouldnt of made a Jack lives story, and kill him off
I Need More Cowbell chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
why did you make him die at the end? ugh i hate you for that...but it was a good story otherwise. if you just deleted that last paragraph where Jack dies...
bellecatastrophe chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
the movie made me cry

this was sad too.

but good. well done
meg chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
Wow, wow, i'm sorry but that was the worst ending ever! i couldn't stand it, u know, like ur writing a "Jack Survives" story, and the least u can do is acctually let him live!it sounds like u just ran out of ideas and killed him off, its weird i didn't like it at all.
Emily chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
I love ur story that is how the movie should of ended. Great story i hope u right new endings to movies that had sucky endings.
Lolitaiishe chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
DAMMIT! He died AGAIN! But good story though. It was a lot better than him freezing! _
iwry-always chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
I so did not expect him to bloody die! That's not suppose to happen, he's supposed to live and they can get married and have lots and lots of kids! I'm only joking, but you win the shock award today, so congrats for that. I didn't want him to die! (*sad face*). That was very well written and I loved it, you made me fall into a sense of security about them having a happily ever after, and then you snatched it away. Again making with the funny, and if this ramble made you smile even once then it worked. Bye!
Aye chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
Oh my god! Why did you make him die? That was so cruel! This was such a beautiful story I was expecting for an equally beatiful ending!


Sorry, got a little crazy. Excellent story except for the ending...
gambitslove chapter 1 . 4/25/2003
I was expecting a happy ending not him dying yet again. That was too cruel to add that last paragraph. Thanks for the sweet story!
starlight627 chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
It was a really good ending to Titanic...until Jack died. Aw man...why did he have to die?
Artichokey chapter 1 . 2/21/2003
Why the heck did you make him die? There was apsolutely no reason! What is the point of Rose saving him, if he just dies three days later?

Okay sorry, I got a little carried away. The story was good.:)
Erica-ca Jones chapter 1 . 2/9/2003
He died! Wah! That was really good. I like how you twisted it around like that. Good work!
Joyce Wade chapter 1 . 1/25/2003
That was good except that he still died.
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