Reviews for Contractual Invalidation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, this has to be one of if not the best contract centered story I have ever read! Take a bow. |
![]() ![]() I want moreee |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have it a chance but your Daphne is a death eater who simply thinks getting dirty is beneath her and your harry bears no resemblance to Harry poþrt beyond a name. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED THIS |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this was astounding. great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read quite a few stories featuring Daphne but I have to say I really disliked this version of her and Harry want really much better |
![]() ![]() This story has the potential for a sequel, like the mysterious place where Harry took Dapgne and the pursuers of the Elder wand...and I hope to see a Daphne with scenes that make her look more adorable in the future since it's hard to get on with this version and that it doesn't censor the scenes within the intimacy... :D |
![]() ![]() wow honestly great story had me hooked straight from the beginning. |
![]() ![]() Honestly, this fic has depth, but it seemed disappointing, I expected a much darker path of Harry finally taking advantage of a contract to strike back at a pureblood family with the same goals and gain wealth, status and a personal slave instead of just try to win her over or reform Daphne from her ways. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The magical contract premise is atrocious. The rest of the narrative is an intriguing overview of high-level seduction. Solid writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder if being a hypocrite is a genetic flaw in Purebloods. Not to mention that she still is using the mudblood slur while talking to Harry when his mother was a very well known muggleborn, which means she's either immensely ignorant or just plain cruel and hypocritical. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is it in so many fanfics that when Purebloods use their traditions for their benefits at the cost of others its acceptable and just, but when Harry does the same thing he becomes the bad guy? Sure he was being a dick, but at the same time he was simply "playing the game" their way. Daphne tried to bully, guilt, and otherwise manipulate him into voiding the contract, yet he's the bad guy for using said contract to get her to date him for his political agenda? So it's OK for the Greengrasses to do it but not Potter? Seems the height of Pureblood hypocrisy that they are allowed to use their traditions to their advantage yet when it's used AGAINST them it's bad and evil. |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS WAS REALLY GOOD OMG |
![]() ![]() I'm glad he didn't apologize, the whole thing where Daphne or her family do or say something shitty and then throw a hissy fit when he claps back with something similar is getting old fast |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was just magnificent ! |