I felt the same way. She's to emotional, to hurt, and haunted by her past to be a traditional jedi. I'd love to watch her stumble down the slippery slope to the dark side. The road to he'll is paved with food intentions after all. That said, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I really enjoy your writing style.

Damn, really looking forward to this one. Everyone sees Rey as a perfect beacon of light and goodness. Even a Mary Sue. Keep it up

Please continue writing, whether its this story or another!

You should seriously consider developing this into a longer story. Dark Side! Rey is an intriguing concept.

Loved it. Keep up the good work

Looking forward to reading more of this!
I agree with you, that dark side that was so obviously seen would make an interesting plot line