A good story and this last chapter was lots of fun! I especially like the a/n:abt
Harlan Ellison/For I Have No Mouth and Cannot Scream. Thank You for the information and I will try to find it so that I can read it! I am afraid that I will probably have to buy it since all my Ellison books are in boxes in the attic which I cannot get into! "XXXX"
On to the next chapter...

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Sorry about no review for a while, but I am trying to train my body to go to sleep earlier., but I just had to do a review when I read your a/n to your "guest", if you could call that person could be called a guest. It may have been many years since I taught, but I know good writing when I read it. Your character development is wonderful and the extras that you add in really make the character, the language is wonderful- I refer to Hagrid's speech in the conversation about the lineament-The whole made the whole thing so much better because it built the characters. I could go on for and on, but I need to get something done around here. I LOVE IT!

So sorry you weren’t feeling well

I was wondering when Neville would get a pet

Terrifying about the vaccinations

What delightful bedrooms

Lovely

So sorry about your dog. It’s heart rending

Nice interweaving

Great vignettes

That was the perfect name

Nev won’t cut it.

Maybe a short Latin name related to plant hunters. You have finished so no names. Just something that acknowledges his love of plants

Thank god.

See if they can wipe out Umbitch now

Excellent plot movement. By god, through get Neville away from his uncle

Adorable is probably not the praise you seek. You have sprinkled common sense throughout.