Reviews for Finding Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A good story and this last chapter was lots of fun! I especially like the a/n:abt Harlan Ellison/For I Have No Mouth and Cannot Scream. Thank You for the information and I will try to find it so that I can read it! I am afraid that I will probably have to buy it since all my Ellison books are in boxes in the attic which I cannot get into! "XXXX" On to the next chapter... s |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry about no review for a while, but I am trying to train my body to go to sleep earlier., but I just had to do a review when I read your a/n to your "guest", if you could call that person could be called a guest. It may have been many years since I taught, but I know good writing when I read it. Your character development is wonderful and the extras that you add in really make the character, the language is wonderful- I refer to Hagrid's speech in the conversation about the lineament-The whole made the whole thing so much better because it built the characters. I could go on for and on, but I need to get something done around here. I LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sorry you weren’t feeling well |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering when Neville would get a pet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terrifying about the vaccinations |
![]() ![]() ![]() What delightful bedrooms |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sorry about your dog. It’s heart rending |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice interweaving |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great vignettes |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the perfect name |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nev won’t cut it. Maybe a short Latin name related to plant hunters. You have finished so no names. Just something that acknowledges his love of plants |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank god. See if they can wipe out Umbitch now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent plot movement. By god, through get Neville away from his uncle |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable is probably not the praise you seek. You have sprinkled common sense throughout. |