|Reviews for Finding Potter|
| ruth hammond chapter 35 . 5/23
A good story and this last chapter was lots of fun! I especially like the a/n:abt
Harlan Ellison/For I Have No Mouth and Cannot Scream. Thank You for the information and I will try to find it so that I can read it! I am afraid that I will probably have to buy it since all my Ellison books are in boxes in the attic which I cannot get into! "XXXX"
On to the next chapter...
| ruth hammond chapter 25 . 4/21
Sorry about no review for a while, but I am trying to train my body to go to sleep earlier., but I just had to do a review when I read your a/n to your "guest", if you could call that person could be called a guest. It may have been many years since I taught, but I know good writing when I read it. Your character development is wonderful and the extras that you add in really make the character, the language is wonderful- I refer to Hagrid's speech in the conversation about the lineament-The whole made the whole thing so much better because it built the characters. I could go on for and on, but I need to get something done around here. I LOVE IT!
| csheila chapter 45 . 2/1
So sorry you weren’t feeling well
| csheila chapter 44 . 2/1
I was wondering when Neville would get a pet
| csheila chapter 42 . 1/31
Terrifying about the vaccinations
| csheila chapter 40 . 1/31
What delightful bedrooms
| csheila chapter 39 . 1/31
| csheila chapter 38 . 1/31
So sorry about your dog. It’s heart rending
| csheila chapter 37 . 1/31
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| csheila chapter 34 . 1/31
That was the perfect name
| csheila chapter 33 . 1/31
Nev won’t cut it.
Maybe a short Latin name related to plant hunters. You have finished so no names. Just something that acknowledges his love of plants
| csheila chapter 32 . 1/31
See if they can wipe out Umbitch now
| csheila chapter 31 . 1/31
Excellent plot movement. By god, through get Neville away from his uncle
| csheila chapter 29 . 1/31
Adorable is probably not the praise you seek. You have sprinkled common sense throughout.