I had to mention one of the most authentic tiny details which you got absolutely right. "I hope my kneazle isn't missing me too badly" is exactly the way a four year old I know thinks. He left for his first day of school exclaiming "I'm going to see ALL my friends!" He hadn't actually met any of these friends yet.

That little detail, as you repeated it, gave depth and believability to Harry's character.

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Thanks for sharing you nice, fluffy tale. I enjoyed it very much.

Loved it but want more

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Great story. Thanks.
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3 Aww, that was lovely. I am glad that I finally read it. I am very sorry that your health has been so unkind to you.

Wasn't the scare gone when the story began, because his magic absorbed it to try to heal him?

Well this story just leap-frogged right up into my all time favourites list! Beautifully and honestly written with continual pace and flow I have engaged from start to finish. Can't wait to see more from this imaginative mind.

What a beautiful way to end a story that I enjoyed from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing your gift!

Thank you so very very much for sharing this beautiful uplifting story. It was just what I needed to bring back some cheer in this increasingly depressing autumn weather.

I am confused, it says everyone went home, so the boys could have all meals in the Great Hall, and then in the next paragraph says 5 students stayed _

It was Monets garden not Van Gogh wasn't it... Sorry _

Did Neville change his mind about wanting Van Goghs garden on his walls then?