typical Sara advice. hopefully it'll go better than it did for Joe!

One hell of a story. I never got into Castlevania, so it pleased me greatly to find out how well you explained everything in the context of the Worm universe.

I really like this take on the Ninę battle. I think it strikes a good balance between "scary as hell" and "actually winnable".

As great as this story is, it is rather disappointing that we got to see so little of Amy and Taylor's relationship.

Hell, for the last 50 chapters or so, she was barely even in the story.

I was almost impressed with your version of Jack Slash - given that line about not screwing with someone that powerful.

Then you ruined it and made him just as much of an idiot as so many other fanfiction Jack Slashes. The Nine doesn't even target the Triumvirate. They would NEVER target an Endslayer.

I really hope this isn't leading to her joining the Undersiders like she does in canon. I might not have much interest in stories where she joins the PRT; but joining the Undersiders is so mind numbingly boring

great story!

it might just be me, but taylor feels too mushy now, or at least too outwardly forgiving. i think it would work better if she acted very hostile to scare her and make madison think shes going down, but then have her decide to spare her vehind closed doors and have armsmaster or MM or Piggot tell her how grateful she shoud be to taylor

One of my favorite of the "calm" chapters, if not the favorite even.

Good stiff.

Maybe a wee bit to michntellingnthannshowing.

But dang, Dracul, that wws some vengrance indeed!

Ah, reading about the game we played and, mostly (too mich jumping and returning to old haunta for me) loved.

Niioce.

In another donension. So sorry, out of luck.

Also, srrange roster woth cherish and hatchet face in it. Hmmmm...

Still thinknthosnchapternespecially could jave neenndone better. Less... Lasze faor, of you catchnmy meaning?

Still, notnbad, jist not perfect Either.

Poor PanPan...

Always males me smile to read a non sit blindnvicky.

Cant remembernifnshe cleared the "lesbian incest wont happen as they are not blood relatives" air yet, or if itll happen later, but qell done.

Love rereads after more than anyesr. Makes the fic feel like a well loved car you re-awakened, cleaned up, and are looking forward tondrove again (sadly, only one of my carsn"allowed" me thos pleasire, due to atupid overtly strict legislation...).

Im rambling. You write good stiff. Done.

Of coirse, even a well going quaddate in worm HAS to end with death, knoghts at place or not.

Siooigh, only bad parts of thenfic, the early "too close to canonness" darkness.