man, this fic not only took on one endbringer but it took all of them huhu its so awesome

holy hell you really are bringing proper punishments to her tormentors huh because in that world, her view of prey and predator drastically changes . shes lucky taylor had the deceny of giving her the barest of supplies. even the concept of being alone from another time gives me the quiet horror behind my mind

ooh that was satisfying that just outright eviscerating her and sophia lol

man crawler still alive for a century being in jupiter. rather have my soul empty than live for another 100 just to feel immense pressure and burned again and again lol

baby amy wanting to go to her dad just about made me cry

Aaaaaaand I've lost interest. This started out great, and then the S9 arc drained all excitement out of it, and then the sudden pace change and lack of focus on the MC for 10 out of the last 20 chapters... yeah, I'm done.

I remember this as better than it actually is. I really wanted to see how it ended, but it's lost focus for so long I just can't justify continuing for yet another 20 chapters after the last 20 have been this unfocused.

Is this finally done? This entire arc was interminable. You wanted everyone to have a role, but it just dragged this idiocy out. Taylor in particular was a goddamned moron. She has portals that can teleport her ANYWHERE, including "right behind Jack/Burnscar/etc" and she can move at mach speeds. Just appear, vaporize one. Teleport home, repeat. This was fucking stupid! You think you had trouble writing it? That more than likely means your readers will have trouble reading it! I read this story once before but I apparently blocked this garbage out. Even this time I mostly skimmed/skipped the badly conceived trash of this arc. I hope the quality returns to what it was before this descent to absurdity...

This whole S9 arc sucks! The ridiculous trouble with the bus that Vicky alone could fucking THROW wherever she wanted it, the terrible tactics, the ludicrous posturing. S9 arcs ruin stories, and even this one is dropping significantly in quality. In order to make it anything longer than a curb-stomp you had to give everyone the idiot ball, nerf their powers, and add additional obstacles. After all the buildup this SHOULD have been a curb-stomp, but instead it's a boring slog.

She cut off his arms. He'll bleed out in seconds.

I cringed a bit "Scarlet Knight" is just...sorry

Not really a fan of the name. It seems more like a title than a name, like it should be "[insert hero name], The Scarlet Knight."

Welp. It seems once you give a proper and contundent reality check and the inescapable realization afterwards you can say I can like a character for how changed they are. That is David here.

Ugh - Fuck off Danny.

I like the story, but I've gotta say, kinda disappointed in this chapter (Family 6-11) - she's going down the superficial idiot hero route after what she did to Bonesaw. The solution was simple, and she avoided it.

"Wah wahhh, I hate that power, I could save millions of lives using it? I'll do it once and never again 'cause I'm a big baby that won't use a power that can solve the issue safely in half a second. WAHHHHHH!"

Seriously, how many deaths, how much damage, how many problems do these superficial heroes create because they think they're being 'moral'? This chapter had an easy solution, even if some surprises remained.

This has been such a privilege and pleasure to read. The twists and turns and reveals and incredible combat scenes just blew my mind, as did (humorously) the sheer Humanity of your work. Struggling to survive against all odds, with love, friendship, and compassion. The human way. Thank you!