Danny really got a horror movie scenario that didn't end terribly for the victim

She's so disgusting. So horribly mentally impaired it's absolutely gross to read about.
Her intelligence is a fraction of a normal humans clearly.

I kinda like this chapter because we actually see them get there just desert

Ohhhhh I’m so happy Riley got her happy ending

Frick I always feel bad for Riley/Bonesaw like no matter how bad what she did is or was, she’s a freaking prepubescent who’s been psychologically twisted and tortured, by a guy whose power is literally designed for it psychologically suborning people, throughout her formative years. She’s as much a victim as everyone else

Ohhh Eidolon

I just realized it’s not ‘Cherry’ it’s ‘Cherie’ as in Cherish….. their so screwed

Oh good

Does this...count as being Rick Rolled?

Oh uh, hi Mistress, I was uh, was just checking out that internet porn and...uh, came out to check on things...
Meridia, have you been working out?
No, uh, no, uh...I-I'm sorry, I have to get back!

awesome

For f saké. Everything was good and all … but you then this! Madison? Really?

It makes no sense at all that she would trigger. Thats like « oww I hurt my toe » then BIM super power.
And Why anti vampire? She is not even aware of taylor !she is affraid of Sophia goddamn. At meast make it consistent with your setting…

If this is just throwing in an antagonist for the sake of it this is probably the closest it would come to worst execution possible… incredible on its own scale. The mahabarat of stupid

I liked the story.

You're ramping up the wankery too fast, author. It's offputting.

Wonderful story! Great job all around. Yeah the SH9 justice chapter felt less satisfying than it should but who ever said the universe was fair? Thank you for this fun ride!