|Reviews for Pilot Light|
| Mewaponny chapter 4 . 11/10
You use '.' when people are speaking. Usually, when someone does that, it indicates a special kind of speaking- a different language, sarcasm, or sometimes inner monologue. "." is usually used for speaking normally, as you are 'quoting' someone. The story is okay, as far as I've gotten, and I do plan on reading it for a bit longer.
| Marco Polio chapter 43 . 9/16
I don't know if you ever plan on finishing this story, but I hope you do! It's been such a great read so far, and I'd hate to see it go into another 8 year long hiatus.
| TheHappyTyranid chapter 43 . 7/15
Here is hoping that chapter 44 is released.
| sittolog000 chapter 23 . 6/12
Hey, Is Kit supposed to be confused on the whole pokeball thing? As her theory on brainwashing was proved wrong before she even brought it up as Connor remembered the events just fine, The pack and everything. I think she just got shot in the back of the head by that watergun and got a minor concussion.
Yeah this is a hindsight review and I just finished this chapter, well lets see if this gets answered.
| penguinfan28 chapter 43 . 5/14
I love this book and I understand if you lost motivation for it. I just wish you stopped at a different moment XD
| avior97 chapter 43 . 5/4
Please add more chapters
| Guest chapter 43 . 5/1
I like how your characters aren't perfect people. When they have character flaws, we can relate to them more.
| Guest chapter 43 . 4/1
I stumbled across this gem last night and was unable to put it down until I read it through to the end. What really made it fantastic was its character treatment, and especially that of Kit - I found her want (need?) to be special and unique to be really relatable. And of course, to top it off, anything I could say about how engrossing and interesting the plot is simply couldn't do it justice.
It's a bit of a shame that it hasn't been updated in so long, since I truly believe this story deserves an ending. I'll hold onto hope that it may return someday - after all, this story has seen two-year breaks between chapters, so a four-year one doesn't seem out of the question, and there was activity on the author's DA as recently as September 2014. In the meantime, I'll just keep checking back often, and maybe someday there'll be a Chapter 43.
Anyway, thanks for entertaining me, and I hope to see more in the future.
| someguy chapter 12 . 2/3
Woops almost forgot scratched by a charmeleon and neck bitten by a poochyena. This wouldn't be so bad if she could occasionally catch a break. So far she seems worse off than squidward who INVENTED the term "torture porn" *yes it is a different media but the point remains* I just hope she doesn't continue to be a punching bag to such a severe degree.
| someguy chapter 12 . 2/3
First 12 chapters. WHEN are you gonna stop beating up Kit? SHEESH!
I've never SEEN anyone with a worse streak.
Burned by rain dance, Traumatized by seeing legendary bird incinerated before her eyes blaming herself, severe burns from a firestone, panics at being turned into vulprix, after turning back gets a wood mask thrown on her and thrown at by a machock, panicking parents, Rapid camp embarrassment, Nearly kidnapped, has friend captured, after freeing is forced to keep it at home overnight *it would probably have caused a few issues overnight from anxiety* Chased by shedinja swarm, and then embarrassed again for good measure. JEEZ!
| NandNvg chapter 43 . 9/3/2014
So, when are you going to update this again?It's been three years longer than the last is one of the best stories on this site.
| NYSTLSportsFan chapter 43 . 8/29/2014
I remember that when I read this story years ago, it was one of my favorites. However, it's such a shame that it hasn't been updated for so long. I know you said you'd take forever to update, but come on. You should definitely continue this.
| boompikachu chapter 43 . 6/18/2014
Your stories are great!
| TheShinyEevee chapter 43 . 6/3/2014
So... When are you gonna update again... You said no long waits and in a couple of days it'll be 3 years, I just read through your story and found that on this chapter, when will you continue to be loyal to your fans, you've left them all on a cliffhanger for 3 YEARS, sure I update every week r 2 but 3 YEARS, that's way too long a wait.
| cassjo chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
I hope you will continue your story I really like it