Reviews for Unexpected Surprise
JessicaDrewParker chapter 1 . 6/20
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/19
This is my first review ever written. I must urgently tell you that your story came out brilliant. Plot absolutely fitting, characters well established and top shelf writing! I really really enjoyed to read it. Best wishes, Tanja
XxAnime159xX chapter 12 . 6/2
I could just pass out right now. I'm that happy
spinnerofdark chapter 12 . 5/28
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Emily K Rumble chapter 12 . 5/27
This is such a beautifully written and imagined story! You would hardly know that it isn't your first language! I am adoring the story so far and can NOT wait until the next chapter is released! Please keep it up!
librosmysticos chapter 12 . 5/22
okay this has definetly taken a turn a bit but I love all the new additions to the story!
seeing Gabriel help them both out is amazing
librosmysticos chapter 10 . 5/22
okay the mention of luka finally convinced me that this story has been updated, it's been a pleasure re reading! and finding that the story sort of changed a little three me for a loop but I still love it!
anastasiadate chapter 12 . 5/20
this was the best chapter ever and please update soon
Q-A the Authoress chapter 12 . 5/20
Third language? What are the first two? If you don't want to tell me you don't have to.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Guest chapter 12 . 5/19
English is your THIRD language? You write 12 times better and more enjoyable than other writers who only know English! This story had such strong feelings in it, with honest recognition of reality, instead of some fairytale plotline. I absolutely adored this story, and was thoroughly addicted to it until I finished this update. I do think, though, that the story should be wrapping up, with maybe one or two more chapters. Perhaps a sequel story featuring Emma growing and/or grown up? Whatever you come up with, certainly keep writing! I'm enthralled
JPTeenMira72 chapter 12 . 5/19
dunno if i have reviewed BUT I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS MY HEART BREAKS FOR THE YEARS MISSED BUT I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS HONESTY RIGHT NOW U ARE AN AMAZING WRITER KEEPA GOIN! 3
Emily1050 chapter 11 . 5/13
Honestly you are so talented. This story is AMAZING. Like I feel like I am in love, please update soon.
MightyFang chapter 11 . 4/6
Um, this is starting to get boring. Can you just end the story right here? Too much NORMAL BORING STUFF. Could there possibly be a tragedy with Emma and an akuma and stuff? Hey, maybe the new superheroes too! They sound like lameos, though. (Pronounced: Lame-O
JPTeenMira72 chapter 11 . 3/30
OMG I LOVE THIS ABSOLUTELY AND AMAZINGLY ADORABLE HES SUCH A GOOD FARTHER. GABRIEL IS SUPER NICE AND LOVELY IN THIS! I TIP MY HAT OF TOO YOU
rushie chapter 11 . 3/5
gaaaahhh! This is was amazing! the only thing out needs are kwami reunions :)
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