Reviews for Forgotten Paradise |
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![]() ![]() nonononononoooo please please please i need to finish this please omg |
![]() ![]() gurl just killed thalia and knocked out percy and then does trivia like it's nothing |
![]() ![]() this story is amazing but that last part broke my heart |
![]() ![]() This is pretty amazing |
![]() ![]() I WILL END YOU! YOU CANT DO THAT TO ME! |
![]() ![]() PLOT TWIST! |
![]() ![]() hello writer, i know you wrote this story long before but i'm leaving this review here to tell you that its 2024 and people are still reading your masterpiece. its often that people don't like their own works but they can't see it through the other person's eyes i saw how you ended it and it almost sounded like (A grenade went loose, all of them died, the end, goodnight, bye bye) i laughed very hard at it. Anyways though its your choice and you might not like your work i really will encourage you to complete your story. Consider it completely your choice to continue or not. and as an afterthought you might not even see this whole passage but i'm taking my chances again bie baie_ Mina |
![]() ![]() No don’t say that about this fic! It isn’t trash! It’s actually pretty good though the fact the squad made it even half this far is almost blatant plot armor but like its plot armor that makes sense so you can get away with it! |
![]() ![]() Hell fucking yeah I called that shit the second she arrived I knew from frame one it was Calypso I knew the second she showed up she’d be an assassin! Yes! I am so high on life right now! |
![]() ![]() You come back and finish this shit you asshole. lol but seriously I thought this would be done done. It was great I did speed read but I do that with everything I think is good. Hope to see the proper ending soon |
![]() ![]() why the fuck does this have so many reviews never mind the eye bleach someone gouge out my eyes please it's all so stiff and lifeless and emotionless and theres 200 000 words of this garbage? for real this writer is dedicated to creating trash for internet points. I'm getting sadder and sadder the more works of them Im seeing. fucking pathetic |
![]() ![]() This was the best Percabeth AU ever. I dont like the ending but i dont blame you for writing the end like that. I know how hard it is to write a book and have a perfect plot and ending. This was such a good fanfic. Genius plot idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha lol that ending was good. Yeah it sucks when people force you to write. I mean you’re already doing it for free. But yeah I honestly really enjoyed the story. I really think the first few chapters were what made this story really special compared to others I’ve read before. Thank you for writing this you’re honestly great at this stuff I can’t wait to read more of your stories. :) |
![]() ![]() I hope you can come back and finish this someday! |
![]() ![]() ending...I love it not really . |