Reviews for Forgotten Paradise
WCLC chapter 5 . 10/26
This reminded me of Avatar.
These scenes are very romantic, but they are too young to fully enjoy them. I’m sure you have a great plan ahead and I’ll keep reading.
WCLC chapter 4 . 10/18
I thought Annabeth was going to keep one half of the shell and give the other half to Percy so they could share it.
Most kids don’t get there first kiss that young.
WCLC chapter 3 . 10/14
That was beautiful.
WCLC chapter 1 . 10/1
At the start with Athena and that Ron character, it wasn’t very capturing, but when it got to Annabeth on that island and meeting Percy, it started to get better. The setting sounds like it fits the title.
itsnotperkabeth chapter 50 . 7/18
Haven't read a pjo story like this in years, glad i suddenly got the urge to read a fanfic again, brings back so many memories. Stumbling upon it and it being so good, not to mention so many chapters to read. Real nostalgia moment, so thank you.
Guest chapter 50 . 5/27
brilliant, just amazingly writtennnnnnnnnn...pls complete it fast tho, cant hold myself :D
Childofathena379 chapter 50 . 5/23
Hey are you still writing this or plan on updating at any point? Love the story one of the best I’ve found so far!
Percy Curry chapter 50 . 5/23
This boom was so good, please finish it.
Percy Curry chapter 3 . 5/20
Whale sharks are filter feeders. That means they don’t eat fish, but they eat plankton and the like.
FailingAtLife chapter 50 . 4/3
Idk the answer but DUDE cmon why would u leave the story that T-T please update lol
FailingAtLife chapter 49 . 4/3
Please don’t make Annabeth get killed. The answer is bc Rachel kept talking ab the monsters she could see bc she could see thru the mist.
FailingAtLife chapter 48 . 4/2
Gee. I was ab to go on a rant ab how much I loved Thaila and she’s my role model, only to find out at the end you killed her. Wow. Props to you. I love how Percy and Annabeth planned their future too. But thanks for liking Thaila. The answer is the third book, the Titans curse
FailingAtLife chapter 47 . 4/2
The answer is that Hades blamed the oracle for Maria’s death. And my goodness for a couple chapters I was like, it would be so cool to be a secret agent and work for S.I.G.H.T but sight is really getting on my nerves lol. I still wanna bra secret agent tho lol
FailingAtLife chapter 46 . 4/2
Grover finds a pink poodle. And there’s no way Percy is getting his memory wiped right?
FailingAtLife chapter 44 . 4/2
Scuse me while I go cry
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